Another work from Xinfeng the creator of "The Strongest Sistem" Ahem! I don't know what should i write in this review so i just have to write something meaningful, so here it is!Must have elements to create a trending novel for beginner:1. Make a cool novel cover2. Make a flashy or ancient-sound sino**is3. Write a wuxia/xianxia/gaming/system/romance theme novel4. Make a OP (overpowered) MC (very important)5. Give MC a stong plot armor (must have)6. Write a logical storyline (optional)6. Give MC a Beautiful and sexy partner or harem (recommended)7. Write a revenge/reincarnation/isekai storyline8. Write a beautiful rommance between MC and FL (optional)8. Write a (S.E.X) Scene between MC and the Female Lead (recommended)9. Give MC a fatty bestfriend or an unparalled sistem or a Female childhood sweetheart10. Add your own opinion in the comment!#sorry_for_my_bad_English!
This is the second novel that I am writing after reading lots of villian and antihero stories because I also wanted to write one. you will definitely be surprised by this book’s new and different touch on villian genre and hopefully it will keep you entertained. 😊😊
This is ok I guess. Seems more like a junk food read then anything great. Maybe the real world will take up more of the story in future chapters. If this is just about an MC repeatedly going into the survival games and dominating, it will get stale real quick.Not really my cup of tea.
Im not saying anything like qidian vs ww.What im saying is that, I like the way you can read in qidian with the comment system and constant scrolling like its one big chapter.So, Ill just read everything here, and finish the rest of the chapters on WW.
Good story and good author but the story updates should be more frequent. Characters are well designed. Story is also well directed. Please increase the number of updates posting.
It's starting to get interesting, but the updates are too little, need more chapters! Also would appreciate a smexy cover page, it would boost ratings if done well and attract more readers. Potentially good novel and the whole protagonist smiting theme is great! Rob the pu$$ies from the damn protagonists and make harem plz!
I really don't know where it is lacking. I just hope you could split the chapters though? too lengthy even though interesting. Real Good intro I would say. Fine pace. Keep on updating. all the best (◕ᴗ◕✿)
I found it impossible to suspend my disbelief.Nowhere near enough info about how dungeons work, how people enter them, who's monitoring them, required permissions etc.Character development and motivations are also lackluster. So you have an MC who is tired of hunting in the dungeons, and what does he do after retirement? You guessed it, hunting in the dungeons. Except now he's supposed to be carrying stuff around, yet he keeps getting involved in fighting anyway.All but one of the hunters die in the dungeon, yet all of the carriers survived? Nah, nothing suspicious, nobody investigates stuff, business as usual.MC wanted to spend more time with his kid, but he keeps dungeon hunting at every opportunity, even if it means leaving his son with his recruiter whom he barely knows. Who accepts it without complaint for some bizzare reason.
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