The Mystery Of Her Curse

Okay it's me again Author-san for my another review of the novel. Yes the updates are a tad slow and there's a lot of typos in the novel but it's still good. Just be careful with the typos and grammars,  we don't want critism from others right? I don't know if you forgotten it but what happened to their original mission to find their parents? It seems the characters forgot it. Also I read about the flies in the story and so far they don't post a threat to our characters. I know you have a plan for them but maybe I can give a few ideas of mine.  What if they are now the locusts of the new world? Yes they don't attack humans but what if they pose a threat to their foods? Like the food the fly touched spoils faster than normally? And when someone still eat the food they will be infected? Well flies are carrier of pathogens so it's a given. And these flies pose a huge threat to their agriculture? Unlike locusts they make the plants dead and dry by absorbing all their nutrients. Take a look maybe you can get something from it that you can use...Creature: Infected Fly - Ordinary housefly that undergo a mutation after feasting to many infected carcasses.Night rage threat: lowThreat level to human: LowThreat level to food and agriculture: HighStrength: Very Agile, can cause abnormal spoilage to foods and kill  plants by absorbing their nutrients. IWeakness: they don't approach the place if there's a fire nearby. Ultraviolet rays can make the fly sluggish. Easy to kill especially at noon. Skill: The mutated fly only lives for 10 days due to the effects of the virus. But before it dies it lays an egg. Unlike the common fly that lays hundreds of eggs, the mutated fly only lay a single egg before dying.Creature:  Larva of a mutated fly can only be seen during night or when the sun does not come up. Can be encounter during rainy days.Codename: SmasherEgg size: as large as an ostrich eggIncubation period: 72 hoursLarva size: after spawing from an egg = 40 cm                    Can grow up to 80-90 cm Threat level: medium to high depends in the sizeNature: Voracious eater. Eats anything. It smash the food with its body before eating it hence the name Smasher. (for easy digestion maybe?) Quick despite it's size. Can climb anywhere.Weakness: hates fire and very easy to burn. Very vurnerable during it's pupae periodTenacity: same like the HurlersSkill: after 2 days it forms its pupae. After 7 days the pupae will rupture, spawning 100 or more infected flies.My inspiration for the larva is the bullworm from the SpongeBob episode 😂Hope this hel**      

Hi! This is doris, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

Please support this book! Just the fact that this is the same author who created History's Number 1 Founder already deserves a vote. (I have yet to finish that book, by the way lol) Before I knew this info, I thought this was giving me a slight HNOF feels but it still is different from it, turned out they have the same author.The translation is really easy to understand. The flow of the story is also great. If you like this kind of genre, building cities/empires/or whatever this is definitely a book to try.

Jens : "So you don't know anything about the Endbringers?"

"Tentunya ada, karena saya sudah bertemu denganmu, kalau tidak.... Ayo kita bertarung!" ucap ShaoYing.

all real

"She'll hear you if you let out a sound."

Night 15 minutes walk she reaches her destination and enters the guild building.