The Moon Bride

Basically you can skip most of the chapter and you don't miss anything important.The MC is retarded as ****. Gains a scanner of good athletes near 10 meters of him and doesn't abuse it.Has an almighty Wikipedia voice in the head (that is really baby spoon feed basic information like it was a hidden knowledge of the mighty sage) and doesn't ask or test the limits of his answers to plan the most efficient way to use his powers.I already said he is retarded, but why? Well I only read until the chapter 10 but I couldn't stand it anymore. You have a one time buff time for a beginner chest and you want to use it immediately without none to train ? are you stupid?Then, the system tells him numerous times that he can train random people...WHy can't he do it in the spare time he has ? He only trains the fat kids like a part-time job! Use the maximum time of your buff dude !!And then he has a genius (insert meme genius here) idea to say...HEY ! I can train 8 fats kids, if I can train 10.000 kids of high school I can be richhh! Jesus ****...what the **** the author is thinking.Dropped. Don't waste your time.2 Stars because no harem or horny Chinese idiot.

I think this is one of the only times I’ve given such a bad review. I’m just mad at the novel seeming like it has potential but ruining it from even chapter 1-horrible writing quality(unnecessary repeating of what is said to bloat chapters)(the writing style is also awful since it is all just monologue after monologue) there is literally no emphasis on what is happening, so we are 25 chapters through and he has done almost nothing, he has just woken up for his second day.-adding wayyy tooo many anime “inspirations” that it makes the power system a mess(btw it is even blatantly copying people and powers from anime’s)The worse part of it is the combination of powers from each anime apparently Nen is mana and can be combined with devil fruits to produce an explosion reactionDevil fruits-forbidden fruitBlackbeard- forgot his alternate nameMonkey d dragon- something d somethingHaki-forgot something about soul attacksShadow monarch-dark sovereignDjinn from magi-djinn from magiNen hxh- NenOverlordBlack clover books-black clover booksEtc these are just the ones on top of my head

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A really good book.Mc here is clever and knows what to do. The story doesn't feel forced or anything.I would recommend this novel.         

I Dropped the Novel Around 120 chapters in The MTL, I don't like how Mc doesn't kill his enemies and spares them and thn they come with a Bigger Powerhouse to Take revenge, This always happens, Mc kills when he is really forced to, He always make up some stupid things to Spare his enemies, Even knowing that the guy is an Opposite Faction's Force and They will Attack Mc's Sect in the near future 100% yet He doesn't weaken them By Killing him, its really Frustrated me, And the Things about The Novel is His Disciples Always Shows Disbelief in their faces whenever Mc introduce new Things To The Sect and Doesn't Believe him but Later after knowing The features about the Thing they always Shows admiration, Its good one time or two time but seeing this happen again and again makes it very annoying, Mc's all Disciples Before joining His sect always shows Disdain or Ridicules Mc but after Mc showing some Cool/Good Stuff of the Sect they are in the Awe of the Mc/Sect, Its also Very Repetitive.

Mystical Journey is one of my favourite things to read on Qidian lately, and it doesn't seem to be having any issues in delivering to expectations up and giving the readers something to enjoy.If you haven't read this yet, it's basically about a Chinese guy who died and through luck and fortune ended up being the only surviving person to successfully be transported to another world. He first tries to adapt and live life like normal, but is thrown into a world beyond his imaginations and seeks power. He is a talented martial artist who is assisted by a game-like system that isn't overpowered and requires 'potential points' that is gained from external sources. (currently unknown). He fights, develops, and gets stronger in a nice and enjoyable way that we readers can mostly accept and acknowledge that he deserves where he is from the effort he has put. However, he isn't limited to these worlds and travels to other worlds and attempts to be the strongest there as well in order to be 'free' and to fulfil his dream of being the strongest martial artist. Currently, he has travelled to two unique and different worlds. Stability of Updates-There is always two chapters every day.  That's 14 chapters a week!-Problem is, there have been some occasions that get me and ALL other readers annoyed which is that some chapters get DUPLICATED! (Currently has occurred twice, goodbye SS)Story Development-The story develops at a consistent rate.-Unique or at least different to most other stories with similar game systems.-Not all characters are forgotten and sometimes they leave lasting impressions and even create real feelings due to betrayal and death.Character Design-Most characters are unique and have impacts on the MC and story.-Some characters are forgotten/have no meaning but that can't be helped when there are so many to keep track of.-MC develops properly or at least something I can accept instead of some other dumb stories that have outlandish and stupid motivators/ character actions.World Background-Good, im just gonna keep it short because I want to get to translation quality... and oh boy..Translation Quality.-TERIRIBLE-UNREADABLE-Okay, I was just overexaggerating there but recently, it HAS been TERRIBLE. Read Chapter 305, and you will understand. PLEASE GET A NEW TRANSLATOR/EDITOR. It is no joke a bot, if not someone who just doesn't care and is trolling.-And to be serious, I'm pretty sure it the quality was good at least at the beginning. Halfway through the first world or 100+ish chapters, there was barely any mistakes. After the quality just started to drop and has now plummeted. For example...CHP-305 [""Do not kill me, beg you, don’t do not!" The girl cried splinters."] >And this is CONSISTENT in this chapter... [""Wwe are led directly by him, he knows tThe most, it was this is by his request that I came in contact with you! It’s none of Not my business!"]This book is good, and if you want to read it, read it. But by the time you get to chapter 250+, get ready to drop unless your comitted or we have gotten a new transltor. SERIOUSLY, this is not even a joke! GET A NEW ONE PLEASE.

I tried my hardest to keep on reading this story, but I just can't continue.   All the author does it make comments about what happen to him at the website he release his story originally and not the story.            I have left a few comments on some of the chapters, they weren't rude or over the top, just some thought on it.  The author responded, instead giving a normal response to my comment, he told me to stop reading it, he was very defensive.  I can understand from his story and comments response, he did not have a great time where he first release his story.  People over their was beyond rude and would make anyone very upset, but my comments where nothing like that.        Author if you spent more time on writing your story, ignored really hateful people, your stories would be better, but you seem that you like to bathe in those comments and never let it go.  I hope in the future you can get past your experience before you came to Webnovel and be able to write great stories.