The Milf And Older Women Haven

Yeah go girl, Reina on a spray. I support your every single plan.

Sleeping Decetive or kogorou mori solve his case by sleep talkingNow we have Crazy detective maybe he solve his case by going crazy? .....................

chapters seems too short and story doesn't seemed to move up. It feels like while watching slideshow of pictures even before reaching the end you get stuck  somewhere in middle. Seems unreasonable to wait day or two then purchase coins/passes to unlock a chapter and after end of each chapter feel like got kicked in stomach.  Please either Increase how much story develops in single chapter or request application finance team to decrease  cost for coin and increasing power of passes as at most single pass unlocks single chapter that gives readers nothing but fillers between main events.It would be nice to have one pass unlock multiple chapters.

TLDR: Good book. Read it. So far, this book is really good. The writing quality is pretty good, there are no major problems that I've noticed with it. The story development is also going well, there seems to be some sort of plot. The MCs motivation is the classic be free and unfettered or whatever. Pretty standard, but I like it. The character design is also nice, there seems to be good character development on the MC, would be nice to see some more character development on the other characters too, though. Something like Ji Song, who has suffered too much from the schemes of the MC, has a sort of change of heart and becomes more scheming and makes the MC suffer a blow or something. (this is just something I. thought of, but any sort of development on the part of allies and enemies is interesting. What wrote is just an example). Author also updates a lot, which is nice. Finally, the world background is good as well. Seems like author has thought it out quite a bit. Overall, I'd recommend reading it.Also, one last thing, I think it would be interesting to see some sort of plot where MC's sect suffers an attack of some sort, a close relative dies, and mc wants to get revenge. Some sort of additional character motivation for MC. Doesn't have to be what I wrote here.

The title start with 'MMORPG' what did you expect? The novel is yet again about a cuck MC showing that he is a cuck every chapters, this dude is in dire need of money, he can get money by killing 2 girls but he doesn't because they are girls, when they get killed, he gets angry, did I mention that they doesn't even know each other and they met 5 minutes ago? Although the general idea is fine the idiotic and beta MC prevented me from reading anymore of that, I would've expected a beta MC from cuck Japan but not from Chad China.

Let me say this it could have been better is the mc is gay just say. look at how the story started and him getting the memories made him for in love with is brother now that could have been interesting

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