The middle-aged man.

With some more polishing/editing this gem of spicy smut could shine a lot brighter. Try not to rely on grammarly too much but pace yourself and reread your chapter before posting. Fix any mistakes. Still put Max stars cause has plenty of decent smut scenes.

Hey dude your missing the tattoo artist in your harem list just now noticed during the re read. Also check your author comments. I left you a comment.

It’s really good sorry to spam. I commented on a bunch of the pics the yandere pic needs work. Plus there’s some you know you gotta get to etc. but I’m just happy with it all. Hope some of my pic comments made you laugh

Writing this as of Chapter 209. The story is pretty good and interesting. In my opinion we can't get familiar with many of the girls because they have very little screen time or their appearances are too far apart. Sometimes it feels like he forgets about some girls (like the sorority house). as for the writing it's a little fast paced but keeps you in constant excitement but, most of the time the sentences become too long. Also, Punctuation is kinda rough. But overall it's a very entertaining story that gets you excited and keeps you waiting for the next update. A very solid 4/5 read

very bad grammar, spelling and such. its still readable but some things dont make sense in chapter 19. a decent smut story but that's all. would be better if the spelling and grammar didnt suck

Are u you still doing the part time teacher part time arms dealer arc or is it in the way.

hi, I recently read your book and I really like it, all my stones will go to this book, continue and don't give up on it[img=Loving it] [img=Loving it]

Shameless author here, I would like to thank you for reading my novel. And any helpful advice would me most appreciated. I would like to thank y'all once again.