Ok I love the design of your character I also like the development but this is actually just my opinion but I think that some parts are rushed and some parts are kinda missing some details but overall it's a wonderful story
Fantastically ORIGINAL! A refreshing blow(=read) ; amongst others it is damn difficult and hard to stand out... Least of all be original and unique WHEN in a "theme" or "genre" ,- that has been all but exhausted! But you (author) and this book stand out 99MM on originality of USEAGE of background materials and your universe "FILL stuff" so to say. NOT that it is fill meant in the normal way of cource. I originally began on my own novel in 1996... A mix of Gibson, Sterling and Dean Koontz ; in "Linda and Valentine" / "Valeria n and the city of 10.000 planets" setting.And I find yours to be both EQUALLY as more so versatile in its incorporation of all elements and fundamentals as characters and background as "flavour text" describitions of situations and environment and fellings as emotions :-)
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I love this book so much!!! 100/10 would recommend. I love the plot and character development. I totally think you should most definitely keep going with this. You're my favorite author by far!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️
I love sci-fi and I really like the authors emotive and emotional driven description of characters. It drives character growth well. Can only see the author getting better at which will only improve the quality of this book.
The story is awesome and I believe that the start is quite great. Keep on writing.. I will be waiting for new chapters... The imagery can be improved a bit tho...
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