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This is my personal view; 4.6/5This novel gives me a Haruhi Suzumiya vibe so badly. The type of basic concept seems to be similar. I personally enjoyed it so far. The author is trying to convey an anime concept of his readers. The world in the story is similar to the anime school world - which I personally don't mind.The only thing I think may need a work a bit is the verb tense. I observed that the author has a problem with verb tenses. For example:"Didn't saw" and few similar to this.the tense of the verb here is not right. It should have been "Didn't see" instead.Such mistakes could happen, and if fixed this could get even more attention. I for one look at both the story and the writing. But these kinds of mistakes I don't usually care for; as we all make mistakes. Dear author, just in case you want to improve that part, I personally would recommend you to try reading more books (the kind you find in book stores) or speak with native speakers if possible; it helps a lot.Cheering for you!!! 👍🏼😆😆
The characters are well-written and consistent. There are comedic moments as well as gore and fight scenes. I suppose there's a reason why Nathan's teacher is a cat? Hopefully the author will do a plot reveal on his identity. I am also curious about his life in Scotland so I look forward to read about his parents. Overall, I enjoyed it.
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