After they explained everything I said "cool leave me be and there won't be any problems with a girl here now if you excuse me I'm going to take a shower"
After I chose my spells I decided to gather my books and go talk to the professor. "Hey professor Dworgyn, I got a question for you. How do we get back to the school from here?"
"You have much to learn, little cocksucker, but learn this now. It is within my power to give you pain, and it is also within my power to give you pleasure. You may beg me for anything you like, but you will not have anything without my say so. Keep those lovely little legs of yours spread for me, and focus on your task."
The story so far has been a blast.The story is paced very well and has a great style.The characters have a lot of personality and are easy to like.The world already shows much promise and feels like it's going to be one for the times.Then there's the power or magic system which has a fun premise to it.Unfortunately the story just started so there's not too much to say, but from the little we got, I can already tell this will be great, and I have high hopes for it.The best of luck to the author, and keep up the good work.When it has more chapters, I'll make an actual in-depth review, but so far 6 chapters in this has been my first impression.
Hello, fellow author. Since you are a newbie writer like me... I will give you a piece of advise-- if you are planning to earn from your book, remove or modify AI content... Webnovel has AI detectors and they will not approve contracts if your work flagged as AI --even for paraphrasing. So, I suggest modify your chapter initial chapters, then use AI detectors to double check your work... But if you are only interested in building traffic first, then you are actually on right track...
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