The Lost Bloodlines Of Eldrida

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This all started of fairly well with a seemingly interesting plot and an endearing main character. However after the Sect Test Arc reached the extra trial it finally revealed how garbage it truly was. The Sect Elders are all disabled overused cliche character tropes and unnecessarily small brained. It’s like a bunch of defective Korean Drama girls who try to act cute and tsundere-like, and a soft useless old man as a sect leader. The greedy 5th Martial Aunt has the same personality as a greedy rich young master type mixed in with a low-IQ, thinks she is smart, bossy girl. This has caused the novel to become straight and udder trash. It is simply unbearable. If the 5th Martial Aunt existed then I curse her whole family down nine generations to excruciating agony, unparalleled sorrow, and a life of extreme humiliation.

Reading up until present release, I feel that the author is skilled in constructing the setting at a natural pace. We primarily learn about the different characters through Alev's POV, though I do enjoy the odd chapter from anothers perspective. The story progresses well, with the main line being supported through the "side stories" which also help develop understanding of character relationships. Overall I have greatly enjoyed reading Project: Socialize. My only misgivings were certain descriptive dialogues could have used different word choice or pacing. I hope Author continues to update and wish all the best for their education (In high school?)Best Regards

Mediocre with cringe sprinkled on it.The writing was decent until the trainwreck of POV shifts that popular novels suffer from. From there, we get the repetition of events, but with slightly more info from another character. At times, the grammar suffers. There can be run-on sentences and the descriptions sometimes repeat themselves too.Example: “Most of them preferred to hunt though, it was the most honorable type of work in the tribe, hunting down beasts and protecting your family was an honor for these people.”Fixed: “Protecting your family was an honor for these people, but most of them preferred hunting down beasts, which was the most honorable type of work in the tribe.Suggested: “Most of them preferred hunting down beasts, since it protected their family, which was the most honorable type of work in the tribe.”The updates look to be regular, with 9 or less page chapters.The story looked promising until it hit the brick wall of the tribesmen. Instead of heading to the city and getting ready to build up his sect, he helps random people and stays with them. Cue the pages and pages of backstory for them and then how they feel. If the author wanted a more organic story, he could have the MC ask the tribesmen for their story, instead of being forced to switch to the tribesmen’s POV and tell us. Show, don’t tell. Like, you could’ve had an emotional moment with that young tribesman by having him cry about his suffering. Instead, we watch like voyeurs on National Geographic.With characters, the MC is pathetic. There should be a missing “comedy” tag, but it’s cringeworthy to watch. He has all this power and is reduced to idly standing by. Like wtf? When he was following the tribesmen, why tf did he disappear? So many unnecessary conflicts happen. The other characters are described, but you can’t really care about them since it reads like an infodump. It’s the problem of telling instead of showing.The world background is just there in between forced reoccurring gags that the MC is dumb or messes up.

I really enjoy your novel, hopefully you haven't quit writing as I don't know how to check upon latest release dates etc... Ofcourse I have things I like and dislike but I prefer reading something made up by you than telling you what I want stuff to be like.. Hopefully you dont get bored of writing

"What the hell !! It hurts my whole body so badly I start cursing and screaming arrgghhh ....

Isaac : i just going to school coz im bored at home.

Gp:what are you doing here