The Legend of Carmine

Great story, interesting protagonist, and looking forward to more. The only flaw is that the transitions between periods are done somewhat crudely, otherwise the development is reasonable. Keep up the good work.

Something about this book just makes it stand out from what we all are used to read. The details set up convincing scenes and the intertwinement of inner and outer dialogues allow you to clearly paint the inner world of characters as well as the progress that they make. Their discord community is small but worth checking out for some insides from the author

Knight - ok

Suddenly I'm looking down at my leg. Five deep cuts along it. Some staggering and ripping through my flesh. I hadn't known  I was scratching so hard why am I allowing myself to do this? Blood is squirting out. I must have hit an artery. Still no relief. The itch is only intensifying. Scratch. Scratch. Scratch.

Suddenly, a flash of blue energy swept across Porygon, and digits of 0s and 1s replaced its whole body. Gardevoir, who was poking the Porygon had her entire hand go right through Porygon.

I'm sorry.

Girls Love is very often written in weird and uncomfortable ways whenever i’ve seen it portrayed in web novels, like having the MC be a man who turned into a woman—but the romance in SFO is cute, casual and the emotions feel realistic, which is what i enjoy most about this novel so far.although it’s somewhat new, i’m enjoying the story a lot, especially because of some of the concepts that seem to be not thought about/avoided in novels of the same genre. maybe i haven’t read enough of them, but it seems like most other VR-game novels never have game updates (as if they are made perfect from launch) which doesn’t really make much sense.moving on from that, the game seems relatively realistic in terms of player enjoyment so far, which is another positive. the players being able to do what they want, like crafting, gathering or PKing, seems more fun in my opinion, and i like that the MC is able to go on her own journey without being forced into specific main quests or something like that.overall, i’m very interested to see where SFO goes and can’t wait to see more of yuki&trisha. this was my first ever review, thanks for reading it ^__^

WHYYYYYY THINGS WERE GOING SO PERFECTLY AND THEY WERE SO CUTE AND IN LOVE AND NOW THIS GUY SHOWS UP?? HE'S GONNA LOSE HIS MIND! I NEED AN UPDATE ASAP