The Last Sunset in Jakarta

I like what I've read so far. I wonder when will Alessia and the King would meet.

So far the story development has been great... Hope more chapters are released fast so that we don't end up losing interest since it feels like we are still far away from the main plotline

I legitimately just couldn't even finish the trial read due to how bad this novel is. The system feels fine, but everything else about the world and characters feels wrong. Things just don't play out how they should and there's an obsession with face slapping boring characters in uninteresting ways. Teachers are actualyl fine tho for some reason, they are actually pretty good.

This novel is over a year old, and idea I wanted to launch but couldn't get enough support and motivation to get through with. I don't know how far this would go, it's totally up to you guys, however. this is a novel unlike any other, so give it a chance, and join me on afrofuturist adventure across stars and worlds and an earth so different, it's a dream.

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A great novel, sometimes it feels like a lord of mysteries and sometimes it has a lighter footprint. I see potentialI WANT ITI WANT ITI WANT ITI WANT ITI WANT IT

good 👍 I love this virsion of untamed just like my wish come true

"You also forgot about it! Don't be a big talk!" Chiho shouted. "Still! It's you who's driving it!" Ayumi fought back. "So, It's both your fault?" Mariko butts in. "Shut up!" The two shouted at the same time. "E-Eh..." Mariko was surprised at their chorus. Once they got out of the Center, People became less, Chiho stopped the R37 and stepped out. "Alright, You can drive now" She told Mariko. "Oh shit.." Mariko slides herself forward and Chiho took her seat. She explained everything to Mariko, And She slowly managed to get used on driving it. "Damn! This feels so good!" Mariko shouted. "Unlike that flying thing, This one is smooth!" She laughed as she build up speed. "We're nearly there, So don't go any faster.." Chiho said. "Aww.." Mariko then decreased their speed. "Hey, Where did you get this?" She asked as she looked at the mounted MG. "We got it from our village, we used this to get out from the walls" Chiho explained. "Talking about your village.. Why isn't these Saijuns are taking action on your village?" Mariko asked. "Are they not helping?" Ayumi asked from the sidecar. "Well, I'm not hearing a single word about it.." Mariko answered. "I know right, We get to talk to Gentaro-san, but we didn't hear a single word about retaking our village.." Chiho thinks deep. "Isn't that weird? I thought you, these Saijuns and the Kosun had an alliance?" Mariko said. "Maybe the Kosun are helping us right now?" Ayumi guessed. "That can be possible, We just don't get any words, i guess.." Mariko agreed. "I think it's because the enemies is far stronger than us? I think Gentaro-san is just preparing, He asked me to tell him everything i know about them anyway..." Chiho assumed. "Huh, Make sense, i guess.." Driving slow, Mariko thought of something to ask again. "Oh yeah.. How about your parents? Where's your father?" She asked. "F-Father?!" Chiho remembered that a certain soldier came for her father back to their village. "I-I'm not sure.." She weakly answered. "A-Ah, Sorry for as-" "No! Someone is going there to see for themselves! We are not sure yet!" Mariko was about to apologize but Chiho interrupted her. "Is that so? That's good, i guess.." Mariko had enough and decided to stop asking. "Hey, Onee-chan.. Now that we know that your father is that hero, What are you going to going to do when you meet him now?" Ayumi asked. Chiho couldn't respond for a second, looking for the right answer. "I don't know... It's not like i'm going to be mad, though..." Chiho really wants to give an answer.