There was a flash of surprise before a scowl settled on her face, as though she was greatly offended the man she slept with actually had a partner; an insult to her dignity. The woman brushed her wet hair back from her eyes and engaged in a staring contest with Erin.
Goba looks glad about that he had a chance to get this, but wouldn't a month of something telling you about anything at all drive you crazy? Maybe it's just because Goba has such a strong mind! He's amazing.
I don’t have much to say at the moment. Will be updating this at chapter 50. It is quite a nice novel this far. It could use someone peer reading and helping fix minor mistakes, but otherwise its got potential. A major recommendation is to put a ranking system. Though this might not work depending on how the systems align across planets. If you do put recommend a spoiler at the top of said info page.:)
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