I love this novel. . Although this is my first time reading this type of novel but I read it alll straight from chapter 1 till 40 and become new fan for this novel . . The mc characters and abilities is so amazing and well-created. . The storyline is also good and out of box. I would recommend for everyone to read this novel . . Read Read Read! You will not regret. . To the writer, thank you for your amazing work 🙊
First of all, I would like to say I'm impressed in how fast you update. Do you have a backlog or are you just that fast in writing? Either way, it doesn't affect the quality and I am impressed.The writing is good, it has a distinct flow that makes you wanting to keep on reading. Although, there are sentences or paragraphs that needs work. I assume you do not have an editor so this is understandable.The progression or development of the story is kind of slow, but the writing makes up for it. Even if the build up is slow, when you reach the 'climax,' it feels rewarding. I also like the air of mystery you add here and there.Lastly, the world building. Since this is an MMORPG set in a fantasy world, I suggest you go crazy with your creatures and locations; make it as expansive as you can. I'm already impressed with the number of races the story has, I'm expecting the same for the world too.Overall, I am intrigued by your story! I want more and I want to go on an adventure with the MC in that weird game of infinite races.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
C’est un bon roman que j’ai trouvé là. J’ai bien fait de visiter le concours d’écriture. Un saint graal que tous les hommes pieux sur Webnovel doivent lire. Continuez votre bon travail.
Another one, huh. Whatever, when I first started writing this novel, I never really knew what to expect but I am truly overwhelmed by the support. Anyway, I can say this is the longest and my best work so far so I really, really hope you like it.
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