The Kingdom's Forsaken Hero

ok.. here goes.. 1. it was hard to follow at first because the grammar needs a lot of checking. 2. the storyline is actually not bad. just wish sometimes Alisha be a little different... and 3. author, work to polish your grammar and continue to publish. dont give it up!! much luv dear ♡

I'll be honest. Some parts I skipped over cuz things like carbon nanotubes and such go over my head. I wish the  equations were actually presented the way you would see in real life, not ^2 for something squared, cuz it makes the equations too complicated to understand. To the author: please make the MC less stupid. He does some ridiculous things like thinking the system gave him missions, especially recurring ones, because they're necessary and yet it does not occur to him that physical activity is also needed?! But at the same time, the content of the story and the stupidity despite the genius status makes it funny. Also anybody binging, please stop to read paragraph comments with lots of comments and chapter comments. They're some of the best parts in this novel.

wish it would be updated faster, seems it's been slowing down on updates hope it picks up back to one a day if not more.love how being strong in game and life are connected

Well written plot and well developed storyline....MC as well as side characters are developing at good pace.... Could have stock a good amount of chapters first and released them frequently for the first month.... Should focus more on MC... Already many side characters, should introduce less....A little suggestion, want to make the chapter big, make the MC able to see others stats like hi

This is really mysterious and interesting. I am actually enjoying this!! Your style is really cool and smooth, I am actually inspired by your story. Please never stop writing cuz i just can't wait for more. This is has potential. This deserves more than just five stars!!

I like reading novels like watching a movie. Small details about the color of clothes, culture, times, climate etc will greatly help me digest a written story.Maybe I'm in a hurry, hopefully the next chapters can be found such amazing details

It's nothing special. The MC's golden finger is ridiculously overpowered, but he doesn't fully exploit it, which is pretty frustrating. He collects women, but they serve no real purpose in the story other than acting as cultivation furnaces to speed up his progress. They add nothing to the plot or character development.The novel is also filled with unnecessary filler. Every chapter wastes about a quarter of its length on background characters yapping about nothing important. It adds absolutely nothing to the story.On top of that, the MC has an insanely overpowered clone ability. He can create around 100 clones, each retaining 100% of his original strength. But guess what? He barely uses it. The only thing he does with it is send one clone out to search for treasures. When facing large groups of enemies, he never takes advantage of his clones at all. Later on, when demons invade the human world and far outnumber the humans, the MC acts all worried despite how brokenly powerful he is. It’s like he doesn’t even realize his own strength.I could go on, but let’s move on. The characters are completely shallow. Every enemy acts the same, fights the same way, and repeats the same lines. It gets so repetitive that I end up skipping fights altogether. Everything feels artificial and one-dimensional, almost like the MC is in a dream where everything conveniently works in his favor.I have to admit, the beginning was good and had potential. But after chapter 300, and now at chapter 584, every arc and event feels like a repetitive cycle. The story and writing never evolve beyond a flat, one-dimensional experience. Overall, this novel had promise, but it eventually became dull and predictable, both in storytelling and writing quality.

"Perhaps yes but I don't want any chances. Maybe he let them slip to focus on us..."