The iron sovereign

I completed the book several months ago, I went today to view some chapters it charged me for the chapters.  how is that fair when I already paid for the book and it's in my library.  I want a refund

Well, it is a rather good story, at least I think of it as interesting. It has some flaws here and there, but it could still be an enjoyable reading experience... only if the translation would not s**k so much! For gods sake, it is clear, that a machine was used for morst of the translation, fine. Ther eis worse than doing it like that... But at least go over the translation and try to fix obvious mistakes like gender-swapping or changing translations for the same thing (at least I only noticed two instances, where names were switched out from a desribing name to a chinese romantication of it).Over all the translating becomes more and more sloppy with the later chapters and mistakes are continously draged on (nearly a running-gag is, that two ranks of troop-levels are translated the same...)And yes, one can read the english in a fluent way - the sentencens are legal and rightfull english (most of the time) - that is a given, but come on! We are PAYING for these chapters and even then there are Chapters that are doubled or right out missing? Not to mention some ideoms I can not get about "bull nose"s....It would also not hurt, if the translator would be interested enough to read the story he/she/it translates, so that very heavy mistakes like the translation of the ranks would be noticed and can be corrected - EVEN IF the original did make a mistake there, it could be corrected, as long as it does not change the setting or consequent story. I mean even the readers are continously marking these mistkaes, but nobody corrects them... that is sad for a paid work, but not unusal on webnovel...However, in a novel revolving around romance, and interaction between characters as the main point, I can tollerate it more to be a bit sloppy... Who cares in an action-game if there are a few mistakes in the backround info about the troops or the ressources? They do not matter. In a strategie-game however - and this novel is a strategie-game becoming a novel - that is a no go! It ruins immersion and you stop caring about these infos, even though they apear quite frequently... Not to mention, that because of missing chapters we are missing some character-sheets and skill-descriptions - or at least I assume that, since they are not here at least. If they are already missing in the original_ BAD author, be ashamed and sit in the corner!

The MC is a hapless fool who gets everything a person needs only because the author wants him to. I guess people really love it when an undeserving fool gets it all because of luck without having any of the important qualities. They seem to like it even more when the MC is a talent less trash but with some super secret, super powerful ability.....

The only good thing about this novel is that it isn't littered with grammatical errors. It's only lightly sprinkled throughout. If someone told me this was a parody, I would not doubt them. It is that bad. The tropes have been escalated to being the entire plot, and the author decided to use every cliche they could find. If you are versed in this genre, this is a comedic masterpiece. It has no self-awareness. I didn't talk about the story because there is no story or tension or depth or anything interesting.

Great story overall as Ch. 435My only concern is lack of communication from the author. Seems like he only responds on Discord but as he hasn't dropped a link in a while its hard to verify. Which is fine, readers don't really need daily comments from Authors. Where it becomes a problem is when they go from twice a day releases to one every couple months for a year straight without notice while maintaining the same privilege pricing. A little research reveals he has been updating every Ch from the beginning for the last year. Which is great for new readers, but without any word from the Author there is no way to know if any major plot points were changed and if its worth it to reread the story.It appears to be back to a Ch a day but its to soon to tell.Please respond and clarify Author 🙏

The story is great and really entertaining. I am quite glad that MC first beast is not something with a divine beast bloodline. Looking forward to the development of this story. I sincerely hope that it would be picked and published soon.

It crazy funny while the MC is op he doesn't care about his class......The book will want you to keep reading plus can you guy check out my book called "Fate/Nirvana

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