Mc just sucks, he’s supposed to be smart but keeps on making major mistakes. I feel like the plot is forced and what’s up with cultivators and knowing he has an inn. Does he really not take the systems warning seriously.. I hope he don’t let the people he knows stay in the inn for free because that’s just being an idiot, what if they get killed by strong people.
READ THIS. ASAP.
Early few reviews will make you question should you read it or not, well the answer YES.
so, every author has different way to write and present their story all I will say it this one is super 'ENTERTAINING', you will definitely enjoy this.
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awesome story , keeps getting better, writing is top notch. if you are okay with slow progression but tons of adventures, exciting situations, this is a great choice
Mandatory shameless author review here: It's a great story with a realistic approach to the cultivation world. There may be a bit of faceslapping, a bit of humor and a bit of crying, but all of it will be done in a way that's not ridiculously obvious and annoying! The overarching story has already been planned from start to end, but how events play out can be influenced by readers feedback so feel free to leave comments on chapters telling what you like or dislike. Either way, it's not a directionless novel going randomly from one arc to the next. Each arc is important, and seemingly mundane characters and events from random chapters may come back as larger twists later so keep an eye out and feel free to theorize how the characters will play an important role later :)
Had to drop at chapter 251. Can't read this idiocy anymore.
While the story is interesting and author has a good imagination, he is mostly unable to use logic and common sense.
If somebody actually using his head was there instead of MC, he would be a universe hegemon by now, with trillions of MPs under his belt.
There are so many ways to develop the inn and make money using all of the unique advantages, but the MC just doesnt see those or uses them.
There are also many times when logic is sacrificed for plot or even outright mentioned in the story that the reason is because of plot hole, breaking 4th wall many times.
The end result is a story that is interesting to read, but constantly breaks immersion when another impossible event happens that doesnt make sense within the rules of the universe established by the author.
There is only so much time I can look past this until it just become too much to ignore.
A pity, as the imagination, description and plot are otherwise solid and interesting. If only the author would actually think through his plot points...
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Early few reviews will make you question should you read it or not, well the answer YES.
so, every author has different way to write and present their story all I will say it this one is super 'ENTERTAINING', you will definitely enjoy this.
Here is the guide to download the application:
1 - just click on "profile"
2 - click on the BIG button > “VISIT LNCAVE.APP ... MOBILE APP.”
3 - click on the BIG button > “DOWNLOAD THE APK FILE”
4 - once you have won the "Incave.app" file click on it.
5 - it's over. the application is installed
Edit:
Why isn't the application available on the Apple Store and Play Store?
Because it's a pirate site.
Edit 2: Also, feel free to copy and post my comment in other comment sections so that as many people as possible can see it.
The more people who support the website, the longer the website can exist.
And it's plagued with clichés and trashy tropes all over, since the very beginning of the story.
While the story is interesting and author has a good imagination, he is mostly unable to use logic and common sense.
If somebody actually using his head was there instead of MC, he would be a universe hegemon by now, with trillions of MPs under his belt.
There are so many ways to develop the inn and make money using all of the unique advantages, but the MC just doesnt see those or uses them.
There are also many times when logic is sacrificed for plot or even outright mentioned in the story that the reason is because of plot hole, breaking 4th wall many times.
The end result is a story that is interesting to read, but constantly breaks immersion when another impossible event happens that doesnt make sense within the rules of the universe established by the author.
There is only so much time I can look past this until it just become too much to ignore.
A pity, as the imagination, description and plot are otherwise solid and interesting. If only the author would actually think through his plot points...