It is a good story with some cliche parts, like every fantasy story, but it feels like there are many unnecessary parts and some conversations that are forced or unnecessary or dragged out.Overall I like the story and the slow development, but the conversations between characters doesn't feel smooth for me (don´t know how to describe it), but I will stick around and see how it turns out!Good luck!
okay... first off I like the summary, it hocked me up... I mean it so good.... and then the characters and the plot.... can't wait for the next chapter :) :) :)
It was a fairly entertaining read, and I am looking forward to how the story will develop, though I am a sucker for military themed content.One suggestion I would like to see additional worldbuilding to provide greater context to the fictional nations to have, so readers can gain a greater grasp of how national affairs are impacting the characters. Of course a lore dump is not necessary, but additional sprinkles here and there can elevate the quality of your world.Never the less, I am looking forward to the next chapter!
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