The Immortal's Trusting God

I must the first chapter is an original way to start out the novel. However, I must say it really picks up later. So, I must say that both his sister and mother better be in the harem. Heh, I especially love the cute scenes between the MC and the sister. Good ole’ booty spanking for punishment. Heheheee. I also hope that she is his first time to be honest. I also wish that the girls actually stay relevant throughout the story and not a vase. Like, make them useful for the MC if you get what I’m saying. Anyways, I do hope the author finishes this novel since I get the feeling that this novel will quite good if the author keeps up with the good work so far. (Only on chapter 6 so far) Go team Xiao Che and Xiao Tan!!!! Also, I think the harem should be around 10 girls give or take. Heh, whatever is fine to be honest. Just make the girls stay relevant. Anyways, keep up the good work author!

The story was great until chapter 72 as from that point on it was just repeating which was a large disappointment as the story was really intresting

I made the review as just 3 since it still isn't released but I love the premise where the MC's weapon is an instrument I've always thought that this would be interesting and now I can atleast see it I'm so excited

This is not a bad story but it is very childish. Even though author state that this story is for children but I think it is too childish. Even children book like Harry Potter write in a way that can be read by both children and *****. I just think that you have a very good plot to be develop but you waste it.

Stupid repeat same chapter 24 times. Do not read.

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