The Honey Trap: Poisonous Queen Bee's Charm Is Too Irresistible

"Hey, Camila. You're feeling good right now, aren't you? I bet you are. I'm starting to think of going to the somewhat team "celebration" party for at least three more days. I will go there but only for a while. I'm sorry if this would disappoint you. Hope you had a good time in Lenova. Make sure you won't finish the cake again. Nevermind, I just realised I hate cake. Bye."

Yu Lang mengamati tulisan serta karakteristiknya dengan cermat. Seorang gadis. Hatinya menebak. WeiLi tetap tenang dengan posisinya menunggu tuannya menganalisa isi surat. Setelah memastikan tidak ada ancaman tersirat, Yu Lang menyuruh bawahannya membawa surat pergi dan mengembalikannya pada keponakannya.

"Too bad you can't do that.. We know your explosions take over 10 minutes to recharge, We captured your colleagues." Justin replies

[TL Note: Damn.... okay then]

"sembarangan kalo ngomong!! udh sana!!!"

With that said Ace flushed a bit red as he described to them what happened, but not what he caught, causing Delia to giggle whilst covering her mouth and Ash to do a full belly laugh, much to Ace's annoyance.

The mist glided backward. Albina was sitting on the ground, her eyes were staring at nothing, her face was expressionless, and tears were falling from her eyes and down her pale cheeks.

"Woohoo!" she says happily, aloud. "We got ours."

Never! Never! Never!  Never! Never!

I don't want to spoil too much, but after a few chapters I have a grasp on what the style is like, and while the first chapter has a kind of zoom in effect with suitably much background about the world, the dreamy, ethereal feeling of the character decipted just floating through the world comes to an end and the story kicks in. I won't say much about the plot. It is not my place - this is not the kind of book I normally read. But the style is immaculate, and the flow gets you reading, the world is vivid and the feeling of moving is certainly there. I have nothing to complain about.

The story is good the character design is good but you can improve tham can't say about word building because it's only chapter but i think it will be great and you can improve this too the idea of adrenaline rush is good it's unique and make sense overall good start keep it up👍

waiting for more to update. hoping for more characters relationships development