The Hollow Observer

Story trash. Super geniuses gets absolute  protection from the heavens, they can't be hurt. That already makes me not want to read this. Characters trash. MC's servants are really simple, I feel like they have only one line "MC is trash" that is it. I don't  think I noticed anything else about them. This novel feels really bland, there is nothing that makes it unique. I totally wouldn't read this any more.

Potential banger. Definitely up there in my opinion to be a future contender in All-Time category just needs to be fine-tuned in some areas... Mainly that status screen issue everything else is my cup of tea though. Great work.

Maestria em velocidade 7%

Come oonnnn

As he eyes the beasts eyes he looked at everyone and sighs, "Sorry guys but this is a challenge that any warrior would take." He thought and made his way into the forest following the tracks that the creature made until he arrived at a clearing where the flame lions were waiting and Tyrus rested his blade on his shoulder as the Werelion was growling as Tyrus arrived. Tyrus smirks a bit his body was injured and yet he felt as though he couldn't lose this fight and wasn't sure why.

Jessica:ano sumagot ka author!

I haven't done this in a while.

"I'm buying a suit, what else?" He said, and Tian Meng nodded. "It is for my mother's birthday party." He added on when he saw that Tian Meng's expression didn't even blink, feeling that this girl was really... Haha. "How about the Xu young miss?"

ခ်န္ေျပာင္း မ်က္လံုးမ်ား က်ဥ္းေျမာင္းသြားၿပီး သူ၏ဆူၿဖိဳးလွေသာ ခႏၶာကိုယ္ႀကီးမွာ ထိန္းမႏိုင္သိမ္းမရ တုန္လႈပ္ေနေတာ့သည္။ သူ၏ တကိုယ္လံုးမွာလဲ ေၾကာက္လန္႔ျခင္းမ်ားႏွင့္ ျပည့္ႏွက္သြားသည္။ သူ႕ၾကည့္ရသည္မွာ ေၾကာက္စရာေကာင္းလွေသာ သရဲတေကာင္ကို ေတြ႕လိုက္ရသလိုပင္။ ခ်န္ေျပာင္းသည္ ထိုကိစၥမ်ားကို မည္သူမွ် မသိႏိုင္ေအာင္ ပိပိရိရိ လုပ္ထားခဲ့ျခင္းျဖစ္ၿပီး သက္ေသတခုတေလမွ က်န္ခဲ့ျခင္း မရွိေခ်။ သူ႕သူငယ္ခ်င္းမ်ား ျဖစ္ၾကသည့္ လီယြမ္ႏွင့္ က်န္ဆရာမ်ားလည္း မသိၾကေခ်။ သို႔ေသာ္ က်န္းရႊမ္က အေသးစိတ္ပင္ သိေနေလသည္။

First thing I notice is a hyperactive Kushina.

        An officer stands out, and on a loud radio, says, "Give up. We've gotten you surrounded theres nowhere to go!"

Have a good story line! It was interesting and was a great read! Waiting for more 💕