The Hollow Observer

still no update

This novel is one of a kind. Tittle is perfect

Warning : This review is just a rant (I do it a lot) of me toward someone (not trying to give names here)Judging from it, it's for the moment akin to a cooking system but it's probably not the only uses of this quote-unquote "System" ( I say that because it's more like a GAME LIKE THE TITLE SAYS, I put an emphasis on that so that a certain person understand that with his brain the size of a peanut). The System has many uses, looking at memories of people (It sure is something everybody can do isn't it?), when his foods gets eaten, depending on a satisfaction factor, he'll get a certain amount of experience that can, after the level 5, be put in skill mastery like Physics, knife, heat control ... (Who can't do that I mean). There are also some achievements, some are useless (Probably because of how easy they are to get, who wouldn't understand that.. Wait ..) Some are useful, they have special attibutes, the system can also allow him to obtain magical item (who doesn't have those) like a container that stores food, and the food within it won't change at all, billboard that attract the attention of other..Also, shut up DWarden.. Ah damn I gave out the name.

Fantastic novel, good translation quality and regular updates. Original translation at wuxiaworld please support translators there. This is applicable for battle through the heavens, heavenly jewel change, unrivalled tang sect, coiling dragon, desolate era, i shall seal the heavens, renegade immortal, skyfire avenue, warlock of the magus world,perfect world, wu dong qian kun, a record of a mortal's journey to immortality, legend of the dragon king, terror infinity, sovereign of the three realms, tales of demons and gods, the great ruler, child of light and a will eternal

This is my honest thoughts, I think your writing is superb but it needs to be proofread for grammar mistakes. Your storyline is engaging and full of action which keeps the reader glued to their seat. The descriptions are amazing!

mate everything was fine and dandy. the story was good the character was good the background is kinda mysterious. the update stability so far is nice but there are some problems that author really needs to think about.  first of all what is this book about. it's game so you need to make it clear the data about the enemyy when they fight the reward that he gets,the quest that he takes, etc but instead this novel is like an urban slice of life romance type paced story or even an Japanese high school type story which is inconsistent from my point which makes it barely readable like a game novel should be and another point is the exaggeration of expression. for eg. if I say he smiled,".........." which makes sense but when you put he widely smiled,".........." then that makes it extremely exaggerated for me. if it's once or twice it's fine but if it's after every single time that he smiles you put widely after it then it makes it unpalatable for me. overall everything is extremely good but author should definitely focus on what he is writing about if he wants to make the novel a top class which the reader want to read again and again. thank youyour sincere reader

So i don‘t really write rewiews But i need to say this, how Comes that every single review on this novel is good? The Mc is literaly a slave to a girl that abuses Him since the very second, and what does he do? Nothing, he accepts the abuse he accepst that he Is literaly a slave to that girl didn‘t think twice about it, and what I don‘t Understand even more is, why does he call her „Master“?!? She can‘t understand his Words (Nobody can he just groans and we see what he says) and Eventhought that he is calling her „Master“ every single time, doesn‘t matter if she is next to him or if ge is alone, he just goes like „Oh her skill calls me Eternal Servant? Guess I‘m her slave than. What she abuses me and literaly Cut my arm of my body, throwes it away and continue abusing me because I can‘t find it alone? Guess that seems pretty normal I‘m her slave after all“ Ok after that rant, can‘t say much more about it I read the first 6 chapters and skimed throught a couple more just to see if something Changes (Spoiler warning No nothing changes) So maybe some like a slave Mc that gets abused every second of the novel, I don‘t so 1/5 stars Character design, the rest 3/5 Star, can’t say much more about it, because like I said I just Did read 6 chapters and skimed throught a couple more.Is more a warning for the ones that don‘t want to read about a abused slave Mc, that didn‘t have any hope of escape because of the skill From the Female Lead

A very good book, I read all the chapters at once.Hope there will be more soon...........................................................