Overall it was a great novel, I felt the system aspect was really let off after the first few exciting chapters also the ending is awful like the author just gave up and wanted to slap a ending on a tandom chapter. I loved the healong aspects and the romance betweeen Wang Yao and Su was amazing and really wholesome.
A hard working MC blacksmith in a military camp. So far, so good the plot is moving forward without too many stereotypes. A recommended read if you enjoy this genre.
Cliche. Peak cultivator reincarnated and gets “op” cultivation technique. Sword intent weak. Cultivation weak. Can’t even use past laws, weak. I’m sure that if your a god reincarnated but let his cultivation be back at the start. You will still retain your understanding of laws. So he can somwhat bend it to his will but not very much. But meh. Story so far is cliche. Also there is many words and sentences that is wrong and does not sound right to me. Before you post your chapters please consider editing it first.Don’t want to be mean but this is so far my opinion of this novel.
Pretty good novel, I haven't seen this sort of novel before, wuxia+dungeon defense.Anyways MC died 3k years ago, and now partially revived, but needs to kill intruders to regain strength. To lure intruders into his tomb he has a system that's pretty much does the dungeon defense bit.His disciples from 3k years ago are bigshots who want his legacy.Review from C15.
Greetings all! This is the author of V.I.R.A.L, nearly four months ago I gave a review for my book, giving people a rough idea of what the story was going to be about. A lot has changed then with two more volumes and the fifth one well on its way. Because of this, I wanted to update my review to be in line with the, what I believe, is the quality of the book. Much of the points I put through with that review still stand. A slowish pace character-focused superhero story with multiple main characters. This will not change as it's my characters that really carry the story, don't just take my word for it, others reviews agree, and while the story is now really kicking off, I'm only under halfway through the story I want to tell. The other problems people had with this story I've tried my best to fix, I've gone over each chapters improving the grammar and spelling mistakes to the best of my abilities! (There will still be spelling mistakes, of course, I'm one person) which will make for an easier reading experience. I've also added small changes and additions to the first few chapters to give a more exciting beginning and an insight into the world my story take place in.Speaking of world-building. I've made it my absolute goal to make my story a living breathing one you can believe in. Although it only takes place in serval locations, I believe that I've really built up the backstory and history of my world into one of wonder and mystery waiting to be explored over the last few volumes. With the main threat teased through the book well on its way, I'm more excited than ever to keep building the story and history of this world for you all to read.Lastly, I want to thank everyone for reading; if it weren't for you, I wouldn't be able to improve my book the way I have. I'm always looking for ways to make the best story possible, and any criticism is always appreciated, and I love every review and comment made. So as of today, this is my definitive review that will be on the front page until the last chapters. The first review I gave my book 3.8 stars which I thought was fair at the time of the story. But now with more chapters, world-building, character development and grammar checks, I can happily give myself 4.4 stars. I hope both new and old readers keep up with this ever-growing story through 2021 and beyond!
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