Alright since the novel will hit 100 chapters soon, this is a good time to clear up some things for new readers. Firstly the romance bit of this story doesn't start until a very long time, hell even in the current chapters ( Chapter 98 right now ) it still hasn't started. I didn't want the story to revolve around the romance until at least the end of the prologue arcs, because yes the first four arcs are really just prologue arcs. A lot of things happened but it's not the actual story yet. I know 100 chapters of prologue seems long, but stuff do happen so it's not like 100 chapters of just nothing. It's 100 chapters of worldbuilding, characters presentation and a bit of developpement. I think many will consider that the true story already started, but I am being hard with my own story and consider that the four first arcs are really bad compared to what is coming. Also I wanted to, as I already said, clear some things up. The MC is not a good person overall, he may seem like one but he really ain't. Imagine as a villain who still has a heart and didn't lose all of his humanity. Also the MC is not the only important character in this story, it focuses on a lot of other characters and everyone who is named in the story can become immensely important later on. To finish this I'll say that if you're looking for a basic cultivation story, don't read this. I don't know what my readers think of it, but I personally feel like my novel doesn't have a great cultivation part and only takes some ideas from other eastern fantasy novels. the cultivation part to me is bad, the other parts should be good. But if you want face slapping young masters, hiding your power to shock everyone repeatedly and long paragraphs to describe how the mc is cultivating...This ain't the good place.
This story has such bad grammar, that it actually gave me a headache trying to read it. It also jumps all over the place and the story setup just makes no sense.
the mc makes me very ANGRY, she din't want killing people just because they are humans. i Realy want to hit for her stupidity. she thinks so simply than make me sick and the developpement of the history is just so slow.
Another good book lost to never be read the author is gone I loved this book it's a real shame honestly it had great potential well have a good one man laters farewell
The plot is very interesting. The writing style is great. I loved the story.It drags you in more and more, hooking you to read on. Great story author. Good job
let me just start with read This!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 There's only a few books in my life that have ever caught my attention and this is the best one ! I love the characters and how the author describes them❤❤❤keep it up Author
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