Decent novel with typical mc as an extra in a novel. Been 6 days and there is 21 chaps. Author needs to work on the grammer and is recommended to use Grammarly. Author focus on the characters as their a bit bland. Keep it up author
Interesting book from the get go. Makes me realise I still have a long way to go if I want to succeed as an author. Thumbs up to the author. Keep on the good work!
Awsome book so far. This book is so far more than fantastic. Really interesting concept and the way the book is written is great and well readable. I can't wait for other chapters to kick in. Looking forward to continuing to read this book.
I like the story and the way it is improving, the further developmentBut for me i could not understand why is the author making reading more complex, like he could have just said I am always thinking about him instead he goes on explaining poetically, becoz of it, it is only making harder to understand I don't know whether it is to increase the word cound odr whatever it may be but that is the only thing which I don't like about it
"Ok Pikachu were going to begin your training I want you to use your tail and slap this tree with it this way you can learn iron tail because our first gym battle is against rock types and you Litten I want you to learn how to control your fire I want you to learn flamethrower gather up the fire energy in your body as you release it into a straight stream of fire as you evolve we will begin your physical training"
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