Story is ok, but the most annoying part is Catherine the ai that Dave has. She isn’t endearing at all, and doesn’t add anything meaningful to the story. All she does is insult Dave. I wish he could turn her off. Ggggggggggggg
Read on your own risk~~.....Another novel with an interesting story.But, sigh, BLOODY HELL~! It's broadlight ROBBERY~!Spirit Stone SUCKER~! Decided to drop it for years then come back when done. <3
As a xianxia writer myself, I commend the effort you put into your work. Any writer who is involved in any form of xianxia, will always have my support. That said, this work is shaping up to be a good book. The writing quality is good, the world of xianxia is building up nicely, the ML's character is fitted and the storyline is developing well. A good read.
So people in the reviews are saying that they dont have a clue abt whats going on and i can relate to that ever since the second chapter. Its just very confusing. The story feels all over the place and its just too much. I thought maybe i just wasnt paying attention but thats not the case bc of the other reviews i saw.The story doesnt look bad its just written a bit poorly.
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