Translation top notch as always. But unfortunately translating a novel that is absolutely horrible.
If you don't want to waste your time then I would suggest not reading this.
This is a VRMMORPG story that is dragged down by the unimaginative and blatant copying of Warcraft lore. The story has ripped out (Illidan, Elune, Malfurion, Aegwynn, Medivh, Cenarius, Ashenvale and more) so many pieces of Warcraft lore that the story comes across as a VRMMO fanfic rather than an actual novel. Characters seem 2 dimensional with little growth or change as of chapter 167. As much as I enjoy this story the blatant copying and misinterpretation of the lore which it is copying distracts from most of the enjoyment I get out of this novel. The world building credit shouldn't go to the author for he never built the world he just stole Warcraft's.
Mind you, I’ve only read like the first 16 chapters but I have yet to see or read anything that would or could show me that lu Lu or whatever the MCs name as a great thieve as what the title had us believing .
The Mc is just bad written there is no way about it , later on in the story it might get better I don’t know but what I know is that an Ameture author should never write about rebirth cuz that means that our dear Mc needs to be stronger, smarter and way more maturer than anybody else around him , and those aren’t things you can expect from an author writing their first novel .
I mean this novel is screaming at you the ameturness of the Mc , like it his first time playing the game , yea yea I know he had I different class at the time but that doenst mean he need to act like a moron or a twelve years old who just got into the game , don’t even get me started on that whole contract thing I get that the author wanted to write a strifft and all, but did it have to be so stupid and leaving the contract blank not telling us any thing about it is shouts crazy to me , plus what kind of moron accepts a contract that unfair .
There is a lot more , waaaaay more but billige it or not I don’t won’t to get into the details .
how can the main character be like that , what the story writer is thinking even if the mc wants money he can't say everything to others like that when they ask , atleast a few secrets should be kept to mc himself . how can he say about the assasination league with that shitty bitch when she asked , does he even had a brain , i don't like the story writer..............
I'm genuinely surprised by the amount of positive reviews for this novel. The entire story so far has been almost entirely a copy + paste of the popular MMORPG, World of Warcraft. If this isn't blatant copyright infringement, I don't know what is.
In addition, even if the reader has no clue what World of Warcraft is, no less the lore of the game, the way that the story is presented in this novel is horrible. Random names and events are given throughout the novel, and they are in no way actually explained, leaving the reader clueless as to what they are actually reading.
I've read through the reviews here, and one guy even said that the world building was amazing. What? There is literally no world building at all. It's as if the author just took events and character names from World of Warcraft and inserted them randomly into their novel.
All in all, this novel shows a complete lack of imagination from the author.
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If you don't want to waste your time then I would suggest not reading this.
The Mc is just bad written there is no way about it , later on in the story it might get better I don’t know but what I know is that an Ameture author should never write about rebirth cuz that means that our dear Mc needs to be stronger, smarter and way more maturer than anybody else around him , and those aren’t things you can expect from an author writing their first novel .
I mean this novel is screaming at you the ameturness of the Mc , like it his first time playing the game , yea yea I know he had I different class at the time but that doenst mean he need to act like a moron or a twelve years old who just got into the game , don’t even get me started on that whole contract thing I get that the author wanted to write a strifft and all, but did it have to be so stupid and leaving the contract blank not telling us any thing about it is shouts crazy to me , plus what kind of moron accepts a contract that unfair .
There is a lot more , waaaaay more but billige it or not I don’t won’t to get into the details .
Immediately the MC's little sister is referred to as 'little loli'. Yeah, no.
In addition, even if the reader has no clue what World of Warcraft is, no less the lore of the game, the way that the story is presented in this novel is horrible. Random names and events are given throughout the novel, and they are in no way actually explained, leaving the reader clueless as to what they are actually reading.
I've read through the reviews here, and one guy even said that the world building was amazing. What? There is literally no world building at all. It's as if the author just took events and character names from World of Warcraft and inserted them randomly into their novel.
All in all, this novel shows a complete lack of imagination from the author.
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