I keep wishing for a good blacksmithing novel, unfortunately this is not it. Never thought it was possible, but it may actually be worse than Forging The Path To Godliness. It's just plain bad, ******* writing that seems like it was written by a child. Predictable and cliched. Seems like something you would expect to find in RoyalRoad, in fact there are definitely better stories there. Absolutely not worth translating at all, so I suppose it's only a matter of time before this gets picked as Editors Choice over much, much better novels like "I just won't play by the book" and "My Debauched Devotion". After seeing Forging the Path To Godliness get chosen over "I Can See The Lines Of Fortune, it's really obvious that the readers opinion and reviews don't matter at all, and the "editor" who chooses the novels is a brainless moron.
The chapters are more like paragraphs not more than a few sentences each. And I am having trouble tracking how the story is. All the previous reviews I assume are fake/bots. I honestly gave up after chapter six and that’s the extent of what I know.
Very good; will do a better review when the story gets further. MC's character is blah tbh; the other characters make this story shine otherwise I would think its just so so. Author clearly has a knack for making random side characters feel human which is great; when they are actually involved in the storyline and Chens background hah Wish it had more depth and perspective. Less ridiculous and realistic; y'know more tragedy, failure and worldbuilding. Almost a 100 chapters and all I know is the planets name. Last bits just my opinion lol
I've read all the available chapters and this book is quite interesting. Though I am curious, I'll Uriel be mothering Jay? Since she's his guide, if so I would love to see her princess carrying him. Taking care of him perhaps? Though this is a good novel so far. I will be reading this novel in great interest.
Great writing quality by the author, the grammar is good, and the world is very detailed according to the authors writing, it makes me want to wait for future updates.
Grants spirit was now flaking away leaving cracks like highways traveling through his body slowly breaking him apart. Grant was scared now, sure there was the unending pain, that I can't even deal with, but now I'm disappearing.
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