The system is strong but not broken (Yet) the power gain so far is not rushed so much that the novel is dead in 200 chapters, the characters seem to possess intelligence and are not just stupid side characters there to make the MC look smart, the MC is decently smart, not over the top but above average.The world building isn't there yet but it has potential.Overall i hope this is picked, but it's not a badly translated power fantasy so maybe it won't be picked, the name kinda lets it down and i feel that it will put people off trying this.
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖
I really like what you got going on here, but the grammar is pretty bad. Regardless am enjoying this a lot, but please re-read your chapters at least 3 times before updating the story.Also, you might wanna correct some/alot of grammatical mistakes on the last chapters, because for a lot of people the first chapters are always their first impressions of the book.
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