The story is steam punkish with magic flair to it. But it is also a lot different than what you might have read before.
As said before, this is a story about an ill man. It's 18+ for a reason and you truly shouldn't read it if you are not ready for it.
There are mature themes in this novel and I won't be holding back on specific aspects of reality that is our own world.
So get ready.
As for the story itself, there are two forms of storytelling. One from the perspective of our main character(Let's call him Jester) will act as the narrator, telling us the story.
While the other is third-person usually narration when Jester is not present in the scene. Making that particular scene not part of Jester's play.
So read it at your own risk. And if you might have questions, ask away.
It seems fun and has potential.
This truly feels like a great start to a novel with evil MC. Since the start of chapter 2 there are already signs of mystery and the world that MC might have stumbled upon.... well can't say more than this... Blablabla...Wordwordoword... countcount count
I'm SO glad I stumbled upon this gem...this is just the kind of book I was hoping to find...thank you author for writing this :) You are nailing the villain POV.
Really good novel. If you find chaos funny, then this is for you. Words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words.
This story made me long for a feeling of brotherhood. You know just being understood at a primal level. Like you know how when we read romances we start to feel the need for romance in our lifes. Stories aren't really able to depict that with friendship.
There is a feeling that one protagnist reallly gets the other protagnist. A idealestic depiction of understanding between two people.
Not only enjoying each others compaines but struggling to achieve something which matters more than life itself together. the best thing about this story is that protagnists aren't reactionary. They work together for there own ambition not because something forces them to do that.
How many stories have people leaving friends and family to achieve there dreams instead of going along passively with the plot because someone stole your mc guffin .
read it because there is no better feeling than having ambition for something at any cost and having a friend which goes "I desire the same thing i would never give up, Brother" .Then discussing about that thing with him. Especially when you have been denied it for so long.
It's a feeling like loving to sing spending almost all waking moment perfecting the craft but everyone you know is deaf . They love you but they can't appreciate it with some passion as you and then meeting another singer.
I am intrested even though i am usually not intrested in non portal fantasy type of stories.I am actually intrested in this. It made me feel like something diffirent. Like not only i enjoyed it i also felt a need for such a brotherhood type friendship after reading the story.
Style: pretty good. not average. better than average.
Grammer: I don't know enough grammer to rate this. Wasn't able to spot mistakes.
Story It's a new and unique feeling. Prologue is one of the best things i read. Not once i looked at a character in the story and thought "what a idiot". The story isn't unique but it really conveys emotions well. It's probably something subtle i can't put my finger on.
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As said before, this is a story about an ill man. It's 18+ for a reason and you truly shouldn't read it if you are not ready for it.
There are mature themes in this novel and I won't be holding back on specific aspects of reality that is our own world.
So get ready.
As for the story itself, there are two forms of storytelling. One from the perspective of our main character(Let's call him Jester) will act as the narrator, telling us the story.
While the other is third-person usually narration when Jester is not present in the scene. Making that particular scene not part of Jester's play.
So read it at your own risk. And if you might have questions, ask away.
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This truly feels like a great start to a novel with evil MC. Since the start of chapter 2 there are already signs of mystery and the world that MC might have stumbled upon.... well can't say more than this... Blablabla...Wordwordoword... countcount count
The only complain for now I have is the grammar, which can be fixed later on.
There is a feeling that one protagnist reallly gets the other protagnist. A idealestic depiction of understanding between two people.
Not only enjoying each others compaines but struggling to achieve something which matters more than life itself together. the best thing about this story is that protagnists aren't reactionary. They work together for there own ambition not because something forces them to do that.
How many stories have people leaving friends and family to achieve there dreams instead of going along passively with the plot because someone stole your mc guffin .
read it because there is no better feeling than having ambition for something at any cost and having a friend which goes "I desire the same thing i would never give up, Brother" .Then discussing about that thing with him. Especially when you have been denied it for so long.
It's a feeling like loving to sing spending almost all waking moment perfecting the craft but everyone you know is deaf . They love you but they can't appreciate it with some passion as you and then meeting another singer.
I am intrested even though i am usually not intrested in non portal fantasy type of stories.I am actually intrested in this. It made me feel like something diffirent. Like not only i enjoyed it i also felt a need for such a brotherhood type friendship after reading the story.
Style: pretty good. not average. better than average.
Grammer: I don't know enough grammer to rate this. Wasn't able to spot mistakes.
Story It's a new and unique feeling. Prologue is one of the best things i read. Not once i looked at a character in the story and thought "what a idiot". The story isn't unique but it really conveys emotions well. It's probably something subtle i can't put my finger on.