Tied up to a cross shaped post was a man, a man with a bandana tied around his head and a green haramaki. From all the stories and all of the rumors he had heard, Koby knew it could only be one person, the legendary demon known as Roronoa Zoro.
The chapters are in the process of being a edited by an editor so the mistakes in the first chapter's should soon disappear and make the book more readable. This will also be the reason for when you will be seeing a lot of coments at the end of chapter but a little to no paragraph comments since the whole chapter is being replace by a new one in its place causing the paragraph comments to dissapear.Thanks.
i tried boys, i did, i tried so hard to keep reading but i just could not keep going. I am the type of person that can keep readying if there is really bad grammar, and even if there are allot of plot holes. But i cant stand when Authors give there MC's an op background and nerf them just to make the conflicts they have more interesting.In this case i hate the fact that The author says that the MC has an IQ of 260. And before he reincarnated he was 26 years old. So he should be really smart right? he shouldn't act like a child right? he should think things through before acting right? nope! he does none of that.He gets upset when his mom treats him like a kid, when he is one in his new world. You would think he would realize that his mom does not know he has the mind of a 26 year old( or should have, since there's times he acts like a kid)He adopts a kid and his sister who is sick on the spot for no reason at all and makes them his lil bro and big sis. He treats every one like there his best friend and they have known each other for years. Even though there is people that want him dead, and he knows that because he was poisoned by those people, so you would think he would be cautions of new people right? But hes not.Chapters also drag on and on, The author did mention that this novel was going to be like 2000 chapters i don't know why. Now i could understand if he was actually slowly building up the technology. So of course it would make sense to have allot of chapters. But most of the chapters are basically filler, because theirs like 10 chapters of his knights training. Nothing to do with building his city up, just lots of chapters of them doing training drills. Like the author could not give us a quick synopsis of what there training was?I know there are people that like it, and if the MC wasn't so dumb, when he should be crazy smart. Even with all the chapters that feel like filler, even with the bad grammar. I would probobly really enjoy this, But the more i read i keep thinking "he's so F**king stupid, why is he so F**king stupid". And I am just not enjoying reading it. You know a novel does not have your attention when you start to skip chapters.
A very promising start, from the very first chapter I was hooked. The way the novel has developed I liked it a lot. The only sad thing is that it has so few chapters that I only wish it would be published faster!
Since I am the one who created this book I should probably congratulate myself if someone chooses not toWell aside from that this series is my second work and in all truth it is the one I really have faith inHere are the things to expect from this story1. You will definitely not see a good and kind mc here. He might even be like fang yuan or even worse since I am a Faithful follower in the ways of fang yuan so people who loves good mc this will definitely not be your cup of tea2. Do not expect an op mc from this show. He will not be really strong but he will also not be really weak. Although he might be really strong in the eyes of humans in the future of this novel3. This mc will suffer alot. The mc will go through unimaginable pain to achieve his dream. And maybe at a certain point he might go insane4. The novel will have romance in it but do not expect it to be all flowers and roses as it could end at any given moment.5. Do not try to do the things which our mc will do in this novel as if u do then u will be considered by society the devil himselfWell then I just wanted to tell readers of this novel this things so If you know you do nor like bad mc's NEVER READ THIS!!! Well I hope to see you all in the future❤️❤️❤️❤️
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