its fine the story is average the background is fine but if you could explain a bit more about the place and background the writing is um lets just say the same as google translate it feels out of place instead of explaining i feel like the explaining give me more quistion because i feel there is something odd in the sentence because of the lack of explaining and english and if you could talk more about the character apperance thats all i have to say about it
The chapter that I look forward to the most during the day ! The story is interesting and we always want to know more at the end of each chapter.Keep up the good work.
Personal review from the author.It is rather subjective as it is my own novel, but I won't make things up regarding what I would feel from the prospective of a reader.First and foremost the writing quality. It's not that good but still readable. Ifind that overall the sentences make sense and their structure is fine.There are minor mistakes here and there, therefore i cannot give four stars and since the writing isn't spectacular neither five.Then the story developement. I think It's pretty intriguing, I quite like the fights too.But there are some parts that seems rather random and not planned beforehand.Personally I really like the MC. It may be because I'm the author, but I think he is quite cool. It's a bit shameless but it's my opinion. Thus i gave 5 starts on the character.The updating stability is pretty random, but new chapters will come sooner or later. Thus I gave three stars.About the world background, I personally like the variety of scenarios presented in the novel.
"Cassie, I think he's mistaken. Alex is not here, she went with me at the market earlier today and we part ways because she needs to go to your house."
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