THE FORSAKEN RISE

The story is pretty basic but the pase is quite fast which I do like. The grammar is a mess and so are the chapters. Sometimes the chapters are out of order.

Well, where to begin... It certainly won't be a novel for everyone. Both the title and the beginning may discourage many people, but I think it's worth giving the author a chance because the last chapters are really great and give hope that the novel will be really good. Personally, I like how the author presents the relationships between the characters. The relationship between MC and Violetta (definitely the best female character of the series) deserves special praise. I hope that in future chapters we will have the opportunity to see her more often.From the comments of other people I can conclude that the author presents the fight scenes very well. Personally, I usually skip half of the description, so in this matter I can only rely on the opinion of others, and they are very positive.As far as the quality of writing goes, I have no major complaints. Reading other noveles on the site, this one is certainly well above average.To sum it all up, objectively the novel deserves4 - 4.5 stars (with a lot of potential). However, I give 5 because of Violetta.

This is good so far... the plot is interesting and there are a lot of questions both from Damien old and new world. Seeing the tags, I think I know where this story going to be.Looking forward for it.

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As all bias author's I can say with certainty I worked hard and I believe I did a good job. Hope you enjoy my novel and Ning Fan's second life. If you find anything you believe I should fix I'll consider it and keep it in mind but the direction of the story shall not change even I'm excited to see what's next hehehe I will try my best to keep up with everyone's pace not too fast that people can't enjoy it but also not too slow where everyone loses interest.

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The novel is horrendous atrocious it is not even close to being able to comprehend it is extremely unintelligible with 99% of the written content this author is atrocious as a writer and doesn’t need to continue writing unless they fluently learn how to speak and write english.

Quite honestly sometimes I look at a novel and say to myself 'damn maybe I should read that' but then I see the synopsis and get instantly turned off. Please for the love of this novel please put in a better synopsis, it's a problem that could prevent people from reading this novel.