Charlotte Mecklen has crossed into the Farse Empire, only wanting to be a civil servant in a foreign land. He isn’t a combatant… but who would have thought that even administrative staff would be called to the battlefield!
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ChaosSpawn rated it
The storyline is good but quality of the grammar & expression is terrible. With proper editing this could be a great book.0 0 Reply
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BBSS rated it
I really like this novel! I got hooked since the beginning, and I was so disappointed when the chapters began to become locked, lol. But, I would gladly unlock the chapters because this is such an amazing novel!0 0 Reply
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cants rated it
Amazing writing style. This right here is pro level writing, I’m speachless. There are little to no mistakes, it’s smooth and addictive, there was nothing what would disturb me while I was trying to focus on the story. It’s easy to imagine the action and enviroment0 0 Reply
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sergioh1t rated it
My impression on this one is, it was really good and many good and detail description around the game. It also has a good gaming mechanism which almost follow the norm in real life. It very in opinion. Thanks author0 0 Reply
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Dreams_Reader01928 rated it
First of all, that was a refreshing introduction. A lot of readers know about VR game and it would be good to read another work of a potential star 😉The narration and description are clean and brief. Easy to understand. Easy to read.More updates!!!0 0 Reply
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MuhammadDadang rated it
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.0 0 Reply
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DarkFight3ruL rated it
An interesting story that could be a lot better with bit more work on the translation. Gender indicators are a mess and there is a lot of flavor content missing after translation.0 0 Reply
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Waakaranai rated it
Errors all over the place and even a Name change at Chapter 200 0 Reply
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