The First Magical World War

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  • Status: Ongoing

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  1. ChaosSpawn
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    The storyline is good but quality of the grammar & expression is terrible. With proper editing this could be a great book.
  1. BBSS
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    I really like this novel! I got hooked since the beginning, and I was so disappointed when the chapters began to become locked, lol. But, I would gladly unlock the chapters because this is such an amazing novel!
  1. cants
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    Amazing writing style. This right here is pro level writing, I’m speachless. There are little to no mistakes, it’s smooth and addictive, there was nothing what would disturb me while I was trying to focus on the story. It’s easy to imagine the action and enviroment
  1. sergioh1t
    sergioh1t rated it
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    My impression on this one is, it was really good and many good and detail description around the game. It also has a good gaming mechanism which almost follow the norm in real life. It very in opinion. Thanks author
  1. Dreams_Reader01928
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    First of all, that was a refreshing introduction. A lot of readers know about VR game and it would be good to read another work of a potential star 😉The narration and description are clean and brief. Easy to understand. Easy to read.More updates!!!
  1. MuhammadDadang
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    Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
  1. DarkFight3ruL
    DarkFight3ruL rated it
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    An interesting story that could be a lot better with bit more work on the translation. Gender indicators are a mess and there is a lot of flavor content missing after translation.
  1. Waakaranai
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    Errors all over the place and even a Name change at Chapter 20                                                                                          
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