Honestly, when I read only 2 chapters, I was curious about the continuation of this story, especially since the grammar is good and the fantasy story is captivating, I really love it.I hope this story is the Winner in this WPC ✨
I really loved the movie Ready player one but I never got the chance to read the book it was based on, but hey at least i get to read this one. This is really well written, you get the sense of the world from the words used and I really love your depiction of the Oasis. Its still early days at 7 chapters but so far they are really good. I'll be looking forward to more, good job author
Jiyan smiled coldly, saying, "I only like those who are powerful, I have told this to you many times. Although you have become a Dragon Knight, you are still weak. Come talk again when you become a Dragon General, I may consider you at that time."
Everyone seemed happy, which was good. However he did not. What happened that night he blamed himself for. He thought that maybe he just needed some fresh air and that taking care of this hollow might help.
" than one day I heard your voice and I shock I thought you are Sindhu but Sindhu was next to me than o know that you didn't like to talk to strangers" he said
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