The Enigmatic Omega Male

Finished reading the whole book. Will post points on each of the 5 Judging points.SPOILERS AHEAD***************************Writing Quality: Overall generally good. slight grammatical mistakes that are easily over looked. They are consistent errors so once you're able to know what word to substitute for the written one you're good. There are times when names are mixed up, but again, easy to figure out who is being talked about.Stability of Updates: Book is finished. Nuff said.Story Development: This one gets the lowest rating from me. The pacing is all opver the place, and some time skips are sudden and random with no warning given. Also, around chapter 170/207 the pacing takes such a HUGE leap. we go from this guys day to day, to suddenly we're rushing the ending, introducing new kingdoms and entire story lines, with only 30 chapters or less left. The first 100ish chapters had great pacing, and while there were issues with him doing things it's clearly stating he can't, it's good. But then he's suddenly one of the most powerful in the entire dimension? (trying to avoid giving direct spoilers) It feels like Author just got tired of his story and threw in the kitchen sink and everything else, wrapped it up with some random time travel and said good enough.Character Design: Zayne is very well designed. He's well fleshed out and easy to comprehend. The other characters Author takes the time to have him really interact with are also well designed.World Background: MC clearly has memory loss, and in the first half of the novel, Author really draws you in. He makes you want to learn more about this massive realm with the MC. And then he tosses it all down the drain at the end.OVERALL: Decent read. Not Authors best work. Possibly his worst. Rushed ending killed any excitement I had for the novel. Would recommend? No. Would recommend the Author for having a decent writing style? absolutely.

Too Boring And Cringe,Mc Keeps Calling The FL Wife By Chapter 170 But The FL Is Not Even His Girlfriend... Author Is Just Dragging This Romance...They Should Already Be Married By Chapter 100... Another Thing When Mc Receive System Rewards Especially World Class Companies Shares Author Makes FL An Idiot So She Does Not Ask About Things

BEST. BOOK. EVER!!! Props to the translators amazing work indeed and I'd love to read the rest of the chapters!!! This is a one of a kind amazing book yo!!!

This is a VRMMORPG story that is dragged down by the unimaginative and blatant copying of Warcraft lore. The story has ripped out (Illidan, Elune, Malfurion, Aegwynn, Medivh, Cenarius, Ashenvale and more) so many pieces of Warcraft lore that the story comes across as a VRMMO fanfic rather than an actual novel. Characters seem 2 dimensional with little growth or change as of chapter 167. As much as I enjoy this story the blatant copying and misinterpretation of the lore which it is copying distracts from most of the enjoyment I get out of this novel. The world building credit shouldn't go to the author for he never built the world he just stole Warcraft's.

After only reading those five chapters, I honestly declare that I am totally hoocked.The style of writing is totally wonderful, it makes it way easier to get attached to the story. I also love how the MC is taking the lead, which helps a lot to imagine where the plot of the story is going to ...I honestly love everything about this book so far.

this is a plagiarized book. so disappointing that the one who published this here could also be a Noxian🙁

Read only upto chap 10, like the story so far. But i just can't continue reading as the grammer or translation are very awkward and seems to be getting worse as it progress

Good story and power system but the translation is a bit confusing sometimes