The Elf Who Wants to Be Humiliated

All around this story is average. It's a cultivation novel with typical cliches and a few typical features, but I haven't seen anything new yet. Sometimes that's good, because you just want to have an enjoyable read, and indeed some people love how "fast paced" the novel is, but not me.The grammar is near flawless but the author's command of the English language is lacking. Moments seem to drag on forever and the writing seems to circle itself in a repetitive manner. These things happen mostly due to a bland, unvarried word choice. For readers like me, with higher expectations, I'm simply bored from reading it.Plot-wise the story is average too. The world building doesnt seem very deep and there aren't very many characters, as if the author doesnt want to put the work in to making a large world. The time period and cultures aren't established (with either the use of objects, technology, or references). Nothing.Furthermore the magic system is lacking. Even by chapter 30, when the MC has broken through two planes, I still dont know what the planes are, what the consequences of cultivating improperly are, what the elements are, or how the elements are used (in combat) ect. Even by chapter 30 there has been only one fight and it was totally lackluster. Missed opportunity for demonstrating the magic system in action.Over all I would say average. I am still very impressed with the grammar, but there's unfortunately no character or charm to the writing. So even though it isn't distracting from the story, it is still detracting. Author should go back to rework scenes and actively use synonyms. Every adjective in a chapter should be unique. Every verb should be specifically chosen to best describe an action.

Noice                                                                                                                                                   

The grammar and punctuation could use more work. I could feel the pain of Daniel. The gods in all worlds are like that; cold, observing and uncaring.

From everything I've read so far I think this novel has a lot of potential. The writing style is interessting by always including the thoughts of the mc. Also the way of how the story, background and world is slowly developing by switching between dream, reality or past and leaking only small hints or informations thus letting the reader guess what is coming next realy makes this novel special in my oppinion.Btw English is not my native language

oThis took my imagination to the next level. I can imagine every description written in my head. Looking forward to how you will end this story!😍

Its great and thrilling to read..Interesting and always ends with the twist.Good work author keep it up.I bet you are having fun writing..!!

Pls update It’s to good i want more god good novel epiC                                                                                       

For someone who have read alot of novel books from the classics of HG Wells 'War of the Worlds' to the contemporary sci fi debut of Liu Cixin 'Three Body Problem', i must say this writer has a very promising career ahead of him. From Character developments to the vivid details of the environment,  nothing is left out in the writing. Of course, the plot is intriguing and will surely leave the readers spellbound. Cant wait for the next chapter to be released!