The Eclipse Of The Shattered Sovereign

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Hey guys I just want to give this review because this is the first novel I actually read through completely without getting bored, this novel is probably going to be my favorite on this website, I can visualize every characters looks, personality, and voice/dialogue perfectly because he gives each important character different accents. The basketball system makes sense it isn’t too overpowered and he’s only gotten like 4 benefits Where I’m at which is chapter 48, the only complaint I have is that the Love interest is a clingy female but I don’t really mind it since he doesn’t focus on her a lot. The novel focuses on the middle school basketball team by making The MC (Jason) help out the team with little basketball experience he becomes a leader and helps everyone get better. It’s a pretty balanced team with Jason being a 3pt shooter/playmaker/ handle god 😂 (he breaks peoples ankles) and having a really tall teammate, an athlete freak (can dunk at 5 foot 8 😂), and 2 other starters which is another shooter and the actual team leader (probably for now) he doesn’t only focus on grinding basketball and only basketball, he has various side story’s like helping out people who died in the future who were meant to be NBA pros and helping his friend who’s like a sister to him, there’s also a love interest but he’s really dense I honestly don’t like the romance because the females clingy and he’s dense about her liking him but you guys might like it. He also joins a T.V program and becomes a bit of a celebrity. Story takes place 20 years in the future I think. Also it takes like a chapter or two for him to die and go back to the past.

I wanted to read it as it is looking good. But before that if I can learn two things I will be very happy. First is there any nationalism involves in it as I am Turkish and if it is extreme it will better for me to not to read at all and second one would be if is it contains multiple pov's then I just cant enjoy that kindbof novelsnovels which uses multiple pov's constantly.

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overall I love the whole store owner troupe and plot base but the authors lack of writing skills leave it a dry read with no real depth it reads like a text book completely monotone with only blips or random cliche plot points heck I just read the first fight scene and it literally goes he uses basic saber technique and attacks with all his strength he injured 2 and one managed to defend knowing hes the strongest one he attacks again with all his strength and manages to behead him other bandit "how dare you kill my brother " he attacks again and manages to kill both i mean that's not even trying it's one thing if your trying to learn to write and all but who charges for the garbage

I really wish this book was still updating. was by far my favorite while it was. hopefully the author gets it sorted out and we can be back to seeing Lin fan

First!Also you need a binary converter to read this story if you aren’t fluent in computer language(Filler to reach word count).........................................................................(Also I am just trying to rate as neutral as possible)

Really like the book, author keeps his update schedule consistent. good book and author