The Devil Antagonist

Speed down the pace of your story a bit,  and add more conversational depth between the characters. Otherwise pretty good plot and have a potential to shine. Keep up the good work!

It's a nice read 8 outta 10 could use some improvements like more dialogue and more descriptions of the characters outfits there is some minor errors grammatically but overall its a solid story I have faith it's gonna improve long term.

oui, j'ai besoin de cette histoire pour obtenir un regain de puissance