After completing their studies, they had dinner with the family. Uka's father didn't talk with the sisters much and only with the heir because he was fond of him. Uka didn't like this at all but she didn't complain about it.
😲 At least let her be with her brother, you can't shelter her from the darkness of the world. She may be fourteen, but she has the right to know the circumstances and see it with her own eyes. Thank you for the chapter, when I have time I'll be sure to check out your other stories.
Thus, he pounced in the king's direction, surprising the man for the first time. The king glanced at the archmage who sent a barrage of ether into the ground under Arawn's feet.
"I'm afraid my joke might become reality. At this rate, Young Master Lan will really fall in love with you. You look too handsome." Yan Qing Shan said, her pout becoming more pronounced. Zi Jue couldn't help but chuckle at the uncalled for compliment. Lately, he has realized that Yan Qing Shan was far from the cold, icy woman she portray to be. She was too cute and dangerously adorable. She had a blunt innocence about her that she wasn't aware of.
I'll likely end up being quite shameless. Despite a slight improvement, I should nevertheless point out that my writing is far from faultless. I've been working to make the book better, especially this one while keeping the book's "multiverse" theme going. While maintaining some of the details and characters from the original GINKEN, this is thought of as a separate work.The way the original plot developed wasn't to my liking, and the books I was making in the background were taking up unnecessary room in the library. To fix that, I've made a new account, which is the one you're currently viewing.Anyway, I look forward to reading all of your comments and I hope this book finds a home.Many thanks to all who support it!
Not bad, keep up the good work. Not bad, keep up the good work. Not bad, keep up the good work. Not bad, keep up the good work. Not bad, keep up the good work.
i love your beginning, a nice introduction. your book really piqued my interest in the very beginning but I'm gonna complain about long paragraphs.otherwise, your work shows the effort put into it.
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