The Demon king's Last oath

Author stop the jiggling and repeating things and finish the book. It is lenghtly enough to finished. A good dancer knows when retreat from stage

Great story, but author need to edit/make grammar edits as needed.

Want some more i think you got a great start of the story, you could ad some bad luck to the mc so that he get some change, in his go lucky attitud to his powers.

An okay story. Irks me that all the chapters that I've read before are suddenly locked and I have to use my points up just to re-read whatever I can't remember. Absolute pain in the arse.

"that is so messed up" is ****** me cringe translator do something about it                   and yes I understand Chinese are awesome lllllllllllllllll

what, 300chaps and no locked one, the idea is unique I think, well I didn't read smth with the exact same idea so really good, didn't read it yet, but just for the things I mentioned 5Stars😆, really good I think and normally I have a really good feeling for smth like this, so 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏿👍🏾👍🏽👍🏼👍🏻👍

Oh my gosh really a great story!!! Ahhh keep up with it. I don’t know why others are having issues with bl stories I enjoy them myself. I mean live is live such people are really weird lol but all are free to feel like they want. Still ur the author don’t let others control u. Nevertheless I am loving the novel and can’t wait for more. I so highly recommend this story to everyone!!!🥰🥰🥰🥰

The Best of Best. Need him to get Carla pregnant 🤣 and also get married and have kids 💯