Literalmente, mi único problema con esta novela es lo horrible que es la gramática. Y con eso quiero decir que a veces puedes leer dos o tres párrafos sin ver nada malo, pero otras veces puedes leer un párrafo completo y tienes que reestructurarlo por completo para que tenga sentido. Si quisieras a esas personas a las que les gusta leer en piloto automático y realmente no les importa lo que lees y solo quieres algo para leer, diría que la gramática es perfecta ahora, pero si no, entonces yo
I did not read this book but the synopsis says it all. You want to avoid talking in the past tense when writing a novel. Also avoid switching between them in the same sentence
Read until the chapter the book becomes premium. This is a lovely story and a great narrative. I chose to read this book out of curiosity and I loved the humour and adventure inside. Definitely recommend reading this masterpiece. It's a wonderful novel.
If you're the type that likes reading VR-related stories then try tis novel out, if not you are missing out on something. Your world build is great, and so are the characters, there are some grammar errors in the novel, but they are only small and can happen to anyone. Overall, this is a 4.5/5, I would recommend this novel to anyone who likes Video Games Novels :)
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