<WARNING> <WARNING> <WARNING>The author cannot do math. Although this is a commonly seen thing, it is more sever in this case. If you want to enjoy this novel, it is better to just shut of your brain. That way, you can enjoy all the faceslapping and (somewhat) cool fight scenes.
Tried to be somewhat honest here.Love the story so far up to chapter 40.I do have some things that irk me but let's start off with it's a perfect setup. love the twist and laughed at brother making a move. overall is a new take on something I haven't seen done and I really can't wait to see how it works out.now the bad things.like this post the grammar is not the best and some words are missing here and there. but I don't care much about it because Im worse.the overall mc is kinda a big baby. he acts like he has no social skills with the female lead but he can act and talk fine to everyone else. he gets uncomfortable and acts a certain way that just doesn't come across as his normal character. now it can be overlooked but it's very noticeable and in many guy roles the character just doesn't fit. perhaps more of a build up and backstory or maybe a reason why he acts in a certain way with her. but when you have another female mentioned from school and he plays paintball with 8 friends... you know his social skills are not that lacking.for the female lead I think she's very pushy and wants to be a man and as you see she's doing it because the role she is in. there is reasons and it works and maybe some backstory? who knows just keep making those chapters.in all if you can spare to read this ugly post of mine then you can read this book. I give it 4 stars and I hope to see more.
This Is a great story i love it but i dont know who became the new translator after chapter 37 or 47 cant remember but it definitely reuined the story and has only got worse to the point i might give it up
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another great fic just got dropped.One of the best i read recently. daaaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnneeeeeeeedddddddddd
Usually I leave a review to explain why I’m dropping a story so it’s pretty refreshing to write one about why you should read one. The mc is interesting and relatable. He’s unsure about what’s going on and he figures stuff out organically or is sometimes left wondering but in a way that’s realistic. It bothers him but he knows to move on. There’s rarely any deus ex machina.The world is wide, vibrant, and mysterious. The mc, even after 1300+ chapters, has only touched a relatively small portion of it. He is exploring it with an actual purpose without falling into the trope of everything revolving around him. He still gets into stuff but it’s believable because he’s looking for the unusual.If there’s one problem with the story there’s a bit too much attention paid to, what seems like, one off side characters. One of the things I absolutely love is that the mc isn’t perfect. He struggles with a lot quite frankly. The unusual cultivation granted by the system makes him unable to utilize the mainstream techniques he comes across. He has to invest time and effort into figuring things out. The lack of knowledge relative to his power, since he grows so much faster than normal, isn’t glazed over with inherited memories or vague references. It really feels like discovering the world with him. Probably the most unique element I’ve found in this is the tendency of his power outstepping his techniques. All to often the mc in other stories are either kind of a one trick pony, they have some mysterious technique that they use from the beginning of their journey all the way, or they always have a new technique to learn as their stepping stone. Here the different stages are more than just being more of the same. What was a very powerful technique at one level becomes less and less useful but with a reason. I guess I’ve said that a lot but it bears repeating “with a reason”. Since there is an explanation for most things that aren’t meant to be a mystery I haven’t really found any contradictions in it and the story has held up for all this time.
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