hmm well this is fairly new story and there's not much juice in it but anyways heres what i think so far.1.The MC is original like he isnt the kind of guy thats too ideal or what most MC's usually are too matured for their age and all.2.And I personally like the meme references the author incorporates smoothly and subtly its hilarious and a new type of comedy i guessAnd please release ore chapters this story has great potential.P.S.- first review (SMUG FACE)
Writing Quality: The grammar is little confusing and the author made pretty much a lot of mistake while writingStability of updates: Don't know if the author is still writing this story he probably quit after 23 chapterStory development: it's fine not too bad but what I'm not satisfy in this story is the character habit in scratching their head's seriously? If the author decide to continue this story I suggest him don't make them scratch their head's too oftenCharacter design: not bad the only problem is the enemies their facing are a little limited in names for example a rat named Mouse mickey are you serious? XD and I saw change a girl name from Violet to Chrissy whats wrong with violet?World development: Pretty good using a VR technology to cultivate their strength for survival from the haze.
I've only read the first chapter and this is already hilarious. I would totally recommend this for this who like both action and comedy blended perfectly together.
"Gau Duzal! My name is Azure Knight, I'm a tome maven that uses Sword Magic. I'm an A-Class Maven but I also participates on S-Class Missions. And also, it is already my fifth year here in Zeul Academy ." The leader introduced.
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