The structures of the sentences is pretty bad, in a later chapter idk I did an expample.The story could be good, but as I said the structure of the sentences is so bad it ruins the flow of the story. Some grammar mistakes here and there.Story nothing new, but till now havent seen any story which has done a good job at writing such a story,pretty sad
Hi everyone I hope you are doing well, I come to present you The Second Prince: A mad prodigious swordsman.Which is the first book and even the first light novel I write and I hope you all had a pleasant read.If you have any advice to give me on my way of writing or other I am willing to listen to you to improve myself.And please help me give visibility to this novel if you liked itThank you very much 🙏🏽
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