The Cute Mermaid's Sweet Love

This is a kind of story that makes you wanna keep going! Very enticing read. The author's ideas and writing style will surely hook the readers. Can't wait to see how this paranormal romance unfolds.  

Ok, I'm not a fan of romance, so this will be an objective review.The quality of the writing is simple, neat, and easy to digest. There isn't much description but really it's not a bother. I actually like that, because I tend to imagine the scenes on my own. The stability of updates... well nothing to say about that really.Story development is cool. We start the book with SPOILER, the MC in a bed with his "wife" who is actually not really his wife. The author doesn't really linger on the useless and we dive rapidly into the nitty gritty. Character Design: As far as I have read, it's all good. Nothing out of place and they seem to have their own personalities. World Background: Humm I didn't read enough to really critic that. But from what I read it is developed and the author gave it some thoughts.All in all, it is a good novel. Just not in my genre. Keep up the good work! **: I've left you some paragraph comments. Be sure to check them all, since I point out some things you could improve in them.

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It started good, but as it goes on the story just plainly went downhill after him having money with his cheat the inconsistency of the mc and also his sister's character is very noticeable. It was introduced that the MC has strong will and drive due to him and her sister growing up as orphans as well as her sister being a considerate person. It just went downhill that after the MC got ample money he just became a beta MC being subjected to the whims of her sister which also became spoiled. Nevertheless it was such a good story but the character development is just.... well whatever good luck

MC IS A COWARD, STUPID AND A SHUT -IN NERD. THE STORY DEVELOPMENT IS TOO SLOW I MEAN LITERALLY AFTER HE TRANSMIGRATES THE FIRST THING HE DOES IS TRYING TO RUN EVEN THOUGH HE CLEARLY KNOWS THAT HE IS IN A FAIRLY OVERPOWERED BODY AND THAT RABBIT DEMON IS 2 WHOLE LEVELS LOW IN COMPARISON BUT NOOOOO HE STILL TRIES TO RUN BUT I READ IT SOMEHOW TILL 55+ CHAPTERS AND IT WAS STARTING TO GET BETTER BUT MC WHO REALLY DOESNT KNOW HOW THE CULTIVATION WORLD WORKS ACCEPTED DISCIPLES AND NOT EVEN TRYING THAT ZEALOUS MAKING TECHNIQUES BECAUSE THERE IS STILL DAMN 30% CHANCE THAT THEY MIGHT BETRAY YOU BUT NOOOOOOO YOU HAD TO LEAVE THEM BE GIVE HIM YOUR EXCLUSIVE LIGHTNING TECHNIQUE. AUTHOR:YOU SHOULD ATLEAST TRY TO LEVEL HIS CULTIVATION TO 2 LEVELS HIGHER BEFOR GIVING HIM DISCIPLES AND YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE GIVEN HIM HIS LIGHTNING TECHNIQUE BECAUSE PERSONALLY I THINK MAIN CHARACTER OF THE STORY SHOULD ALWAYS HAVE A KIND OF UNIQUENESS TO THEIR POWERS. THATS ALL THANK YOU.

Absolutely loved it till atleast the big tournament in 2nd year. Has all the stuff that makes a xianxia great, is super engaging and has a rare smart MC. Same with the romance, amazingly well done. That scene with the stars gave me flashbacks of watching the iconic Bakemonogatari confession scene. Really liked it. What I didn't like was the MC resetting his talent to 5 stars. Seemed like the only not perfect card dealt to him in this life was also taken away. Completely random & unnecessary too since he was already making his way around it. Also didn't like the entire 5 élément stuff. Almost every xianxia MC have that, kinda sick of it now. Imo authors should not just give their MC everything. Give him metal, or wood or wind or water affinity. Let him be stronger in some areas and weaker in others cause of it. And let him use his knowledge to work around these weaknesses. 5 élément MC, or fire/lightening are so generic they just feel bland in a way, makes me kinda disappointed since the novel is pretty great otherwise.Still its just minor issues. All in all, great read. Definitely recommended.

We're no strangers to loveYou know the rules and so do IA full commitment's what I'm thinking ofYou wouldn't get this from any other guyI just wanna tell you how I'm feelingGotta make you understandNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt you

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