Comedy is not a good excuse to throw out common sense out the window. Reading this made me remind of myself when I was 14 trying to write my own novel. filling it with dumb jokes that should not exist.Since the very beginning, the author tried way too hard on making the mc funny or add comedic effect to the story. The jokes didn't land and worse of all, like any other op settings. Author uses the opness as a gimmick while throwing in "comedic" stuff that has zero flow to the story.The mc is already a deranged person from the very beginning. The author should have mentioned this, and I would have been ok with the mc, but he didn't do that. So I assume he thought this was what a normal person is like.... This what usually happens when someone doesn't know how to use comedy properly. Because it makes it painful reading it when your jokes or bits not land the mark.
From the Synopsis, everyone could say that the book is very intriguing and must have interesting contents. Love your book author😍🤩For that reason, I highly recommend this book
This usually isn't a type of book I would personally pick out, but I was pleasantly surprised by how organized and efficient the author presented it. It's very in-depth in a professional understanding as well as giving ”highschoolers” a better look as they were exhibited as mature, secure giving, devoted individuals that sought out a dream to become an idol and I honestly believeufffc even with the struggles and the determination of others wanting their downfall, they will succeed! I also wanted to make a point, the ”Manger, ” may have had his struggles, to this day, but with the determination, he broadcasts in gaining the audience to promote the ”Cherry Blossoms, ” I honestly feel that he may like it more then he realizes. Maybe it's not just about the money he will earn by managing this idol club?!One suggestion I would consider is to check out ”Grammarly, ” it is a fantastic program that helps with punctuation and grammatical errors. Within your story, I have noticed a couple of errors, as well as the changing of characters ”Pov.” It can get a little confusing regarding who is talking at the moment; I suggest titling the top of each change though it is nothing major, I believe it will help the flow and overall understanding of your story.
The mystery tag is not for show, nothing is truly explicitly explained and the reader is left to draw his/her own conclusions based on the clues given. It is the opposite of those cultivation novels where they dump a wall of info at the start. Suffice to say that the build-up is slow but steady, and the writing makes it worthwhile.Not to give too many spoilers but you have a main heroine who behaves entirely different after a suicide attempt, causing those who know her to be in awe and surprise. The heroine has limited resources, but has a sharp mind (and tongue) and to see her overturn expectations is worth reading.
He closed his eyes to gain control of the situation. But he just can't. He was burning with anger now, his face still stinging with the pain she just delivered through the powerful slap.
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