The Chronicles of Aethelgard

If you get over the first few chapters, then you would be able to read a very interesting novel. Going to skip the awfulness of the first few chapters to not discourage people from trying to read this novel. Just know that MC is going to be like the "True hidden boss" and he would have to search for disciples and turn them to be a villain boss. For me the main interest in this story is definitely going to the disciples. Their story, progress, and future is what kept me excited. Didn't care much for MC right now since all he's really doing is keep on looking for disciples, waiting for new templates, and hiding his secret identity to his sister.Would really recommend people to read this book and hopefully goes through the trial read to voting pool, since this is a really interesting novel.

What do you call this new weak form of plot: urban accident? Finally, the biggest flaw is in the mixed plot of fragile pieces from other visual media to the textual one. "Final destination" for example. Without adding a good script. It is possible to improve but would have to add more density to the characters, some risk or objective to be achieved. The problem with this spectacular work of death is purely visual, smaller events that generate a bigger accident are not even necessary for the plot. After all, one minor incident is enough to kill, millions choke to death eating or sleeping, a trip to the isolated and locked bathroom and you can slip and fracture something in moments, suffocate with gas leaking in the apartment, not to mention that you can catch tetanus doing the beard, stepping into the empty elevator shaft while looking at the cell phone, not to mention the growing number of people who die after the cell phone burns down in bed while charging. The fact that we reach billions of humans does not make some human death a important ceremony for the universe to need to conspire.

Because you referenced Digimon im giving you my trust and 5 stars...........................................................................

Time for the author's shameless self-plugging! 😅Hi, I'm G.D. Cruz, human scribe of the Fayne (Foolhardies), and now, keeper of stories for the Abyss too. Although my synopsis says it all, I do want to add one tiny little detail... this isn't your typical Lit-RPG story. In fact, I believe you'll agree with me afte you finish reading chapter one. Damn, that Morgana is brutal. My lead, Leo, is every boy's dream... a successful game designer who builds the best games one could play... but then you get a glim**e of his sad tale at the beginning and you may not want to follow in his footste**. All in all, GmofS was a very fun work to write and I barely felt the time pass as I finished a chapter. So I hope to continue it for a long time to come. Cheers! And enjoy! 😁

Writing quality - It has a few errors in the chapters but its easily ignorable or you may not even notice them. Stability of Updates - Its about once a week, which for a kingdom building novel is not anywhere close to enough. Especially since the chapters are REALLY short and sometimes have very little going on in them.Story development - In 13 chapters so far id say the story has advanced plenty. BUT this is entirely because of time skips and has nothing to do with the actual writing. Basically the chapters are the MC doing something minor like a tournament or summoning characters or thinking about his plans again and again. Then the story has a time skip and all of a sudden he has a fort built or a spy network all around or a deal done with MAJOR characters. Basically all the things we wanted to read about were summoned up in a checklist after a time-skip and the things we don't actually care about or effect the story majorly are mentioned (though even then it is in very little detail).Character Design- There isn't much to say about the character, he isn't bad nor good. We know little about his past but that honestly is fine. We don't see any character development probably because the chapters are too short to pull something like that off. Or maybe its because the System does EVERYTHING for him. I wouldn't be surprised if the system has a character he can summon to wipe his behind. Due to the system being OP we never see the MC do anything worth while. Maybe when the MC gets his kingdom this will change but I bet it will only cause the system to become MORE OP.World Background - Its the GOT world so its already built for him so its hard to mess this up. And he doesn't mess it up, he seems to know what he is talking about. He did add more population into the world which I like very much and hopefully this has a Major role in future events.Overall - Its worth a read and wont take you more than 2 hours to get through all the chapters so far (if you are a slow reader and like reading the wiki when he mentions locations and people to learn more).      

Review after 163 chapters.I think the quality of writing is very good. The author takes care of the details, which is something to be appreciated.Nothing to say about the updates.The world background is acceptable, although I find it generic.The story development is horrible. The novel is very poorly planned. In the first 83 chapters there are two time jumps, the first of ten years and the second of eight years. These time jumps should not have been so abrupt, because events in those years that are interesting have been lost. Although the author has commented that he will do a flashback arc of the eight-year jump, said arc will only be empty chapters because all the interest has already disappeared. I don't understand why such a rush, because it diminishes the quality of a novel. Instead of jumping several years, he jumps weeks or months. Now, in 83 chapters you have an MC who is too powerful, even his time at the academy is useless. The MC system also seems too powerful.In 163 chapters, the MC hasn't had any difficult challenges. He always solves everything too easily.Attention! If the goal is for the novel to only have 300-500 chapters then I think it's justified to empower the MC so quickly.The character design is also horrible. All characters lack personality. Emotions are not transmitted to the reader through actions or conversations.Final words. I'm glad to read a novel with an elf as the protagonist, I really wanted to read a novel like that. Unfortunately this novel has aspects that have been neglected.To the author. I hope this review can help you improve as a writer. Each person has their own preferences and opinions, and it's impossible to write a novel that everyone likes. Not to mention, it seems like this is your first novel. I'm leaving you with power stones.

The tangy iron scent of Kevin's blood stung my nose as it leaked out of his cracked skull. Screams filled the classroom as students panicked to escape what used to be their classmates. Not many of the husks had drawn blood and if you didn't know what had happened it would seem more like a couple people had gotten severe nosebleeds as opposed to the room having been the site of a mass cannibalism episode.

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