The Chosen Draft:NBA Chronicles

pretty good novel ............I love it .................If you are  READING THIS  go and finish the novel trust me you will not get dissapointed ...................................................................................................................................MESSAGE TO THE CREATER -----   very little to no information about the world is written !! work needed on this  .......... .......  i have been watching this since day 1 so I can tell you as a loyal reader that you need to make the character a bit more attached to the reader *heart to heart* also if possible you can also develop more on supporting characters and their emotional attachment !! trust me it helps alottt .. also *system* is given much less importance you need to make it vast and add alot of skills (active and passive)......make these all work and this novel's popularity will increase tremendously as it is already a pretty good novel................................................................... even if you don't I will still watch this till the end .........     best wishes and regards from my behalf  :)   

Great story with a realistic take on a “realistic VR game” book. The MC, Eldrian, starts his journey slowly by training and adapting to the new world in the game. Battle scenes are gruesome and, due to the realism of the game, cause players problems seen in real life battles like PTSD and trauma. Alternatively, the realism in the game causes the MC problems in his non-virtual life as well, like forgetting he can’t regenerate stamina after overworking his body. The story develops well and the MC isn’t immediately overpowered. The NPCs have clear personalities and aren’t just background noise to the players. Overall, this is one of the best VR-game novels I’ve read on Webnovel (and trust me, I’ve read A LOT of them.) This novel is one of the ones that feels most true to what might happen should we actually manage to develop highly realistic VR games in the future. I can’t wait to see where the author takes this story!

Seems like a good story I just wished there was a better translation because there are way to many Grammer mistakes and straight up just random. words in the middle of sentence.

Chaotic Natural mc sometimes evil and his scheming ability is amazing👍

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Tbh I love how unique the story is, about the cosmoses, characters and so on. But the pacing is to fast. The introduction chapters were quite good but not the chapters after that,

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is the reverse version of female lead ethan is a great male mc he doesn't give afudge anymore sophia is a queen Victoria is a naive person