The story progression builds on classic 'Divine powers' system. And the setting of the main character is done pretty soon into the chapters.There are a few grammatical errors which break immersion of reading a bit, but other than that it is a promising story.
Now this is really interesting. author is there anyone in this novel who isn't evil. literally iam even suspecting his father true thoughts at this point.
Though it's just getting started, this new novel shows a lot of promise to me. The world-building is intriguing, with hints of a rich, magical world and mysterious forces at play. The protagonist is relatable, and there’s potential for some great character development as the story progresses. The plot is off to a strong start, with enough action and suspense to keep you interested. The writing is clear and engaging, and the pacing feels just right for a beginning. I’m excited to see where this story goes.... it has all the makings of an epic fantasy adventure! Definitely one to watch. Giving all-stars to encourage the writer.
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